Languish

In languish sleep, so went her fate
through loveless marriage, mired in hate.
Soft-spoken words that now chastise
his world, of stranger’s scents and spies;
gold, traded for some silverplate.

Just once forbidden fruit she ate
her endless strangled passions sate
she made this bed on which she lies
in languish sleep.

Suspicions she dared not set straight
this is a world she did create;
where every little word implies;
one now where she averts her eyes
and lives where love and guilt conflate
in languish sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Edmonds  Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:13 PM
Sadly not all marriages survive, languish sleep does not bring peace. Well written Terry, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Miller Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. Words are very powerful.... Have a great day............
Miller Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Paula
Alex Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:56 PM
"gold, traded for some silverplate", "she made this bed on which she lies in languish sleep" - This is a very beautiful poem written on a woman born out of man. I read your many other poems as well. They are, indeed, masterpieces.
Miller Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 7:47 AM
You are too kind, thank you so much
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Great and heartfelt poem, Terry. It is sad that some people have to use the words, “You made your bed, lie in it.” I might be wrong , but they are unkind words said, especially a parent to a child instead of helping them. I guess that is why a lot of women stay in a loveless marriage with abuse. But it could be said to a person that ended up in jail for some kind of crime, maybe those words might help, but I doubt it.
Miller Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 7:48 AM
True Eve, thank you for your kind comments
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