Language Or the Kiss

LANGUAGE OR THE KISS

But my bee, with stinger intact,
slapped me with his forked tongue abuse.
My flesh still warm, aching and sacked.
I strike matches over red lips.
Stupidly I beg sweet-sour sips.
I wear dueling masks, with two views.

Language or the kiss, must I choose...
Each hot, burnished with pulsing lips.
My baby’s breath, I dread to lose.
Sticky honey-buzz without sound.
I’m cosseted in poems drowned -
flaming elixir of his craved sips.

5/5/2018
Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time 3

Rhyme dictionary assures me that
abuse and views rhyme.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/9/2018 1:44:00 PM
Looks like a winner. Good luck in the contest. Just looking over your work to see if there was something to help me write for your sponsored contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thanks, Sian!
Date: 5/8/2018 7:02:00 AM
It s a really lovely poem, a really enjoyable one to read, you have written it really nicely, good luck
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you, Faraz!
Date: 5/6/2018 3:47:00 PM
You chose the same theme I liked, Kim. I think first time I saw someone do it. yours is a lot more creative and uses great imagery! (mine not even posted yet)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I saw she wanted dark so I went there.
Date: 5/6/2018 10:47:00 AM
So dramatic and elegant, I can feel the sting-
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2018 12:10:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle! <3
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