Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Tetractys

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--Language of Water: Streams--

LANGUAGE of WATER: STREAMS

Rills
murmur
chronicles
despite humps, breaks.
It bears tales: breathing new life to landscapes.
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~LANGUAGE OF WATER - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud~

__Olive Eloisa Guillermo__
4:23 pm, December 07, 2015

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Abdullah Alhemaidy January 14, 2016 at 8:34 AM Cute & Lovely!

Skat A December 14, 2015 at 9:34 PM OLIVE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 11, 2015 at 8:07 AM Congratulations Olive Eloisa.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 10, 2015 at 10:54 PM Congrats on wonderful write n win Dear Olive!

Jan Allison December 10, 2015 at 2:58 PM delightful write Olive - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick December 10, 2015 at 12:12 PM Enjoyed this lovely piece. Congrats. BG

Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 11:00 AM Lovely messenger of life and beauty! This is a worthy winner, Olive_eloi! Congratulations!:) Hugs // paul

James Inman December 10, 2015 at 7:52 AM Lovely write Olive. If only a stream could truly speak, what tales it would tell.

Michael Tor December 10, 2015 at 6:16 AM A deserving win Olive congratulations.

Nette Onclaud December 10, 2015 at 4:19 AM the mysterious feel of this is greeat, wloi.. sweet , high congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

James Fraser December 8, 2015 at 6:24 AM That's the magic and splendour of water and it's ability to create beauty from a wilderness of emptiness. Good luck in Nette's contest ~~ hugs//James xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 16, 2015 at 8:27 PM Thanks much huge James.. hugs mumuch! =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

John Lawless December 7, 2015 at 8:49 PM On no.....not another babbling brook off to tell tales......Well done Olive..tales of the mountain rains carried to the estuary streams....

Balveen Cheema December 7, 2015 at 12:39 PM Olive, this is river is reaching the winner's post! Good luck!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 3:20 AM - Beautiful, dear Olive - A winning poems! - I wish you a wonderful new week - A 7 and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 7, 2015 at 9:42 PM Anne Lise, thank you so much for the comment.. =`) I am again late for commenting back.. I have been busy.. hugs~O.E.