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Image result for Ophelia by John Everett Millais

Landscape

Deep in a forest a river flows
and there floats Ophelia, in death-
There is a deep silence, a hush and beauty in the landscape,
deep green water grass and drifting jade moss
so soft and delicate like satin it seems-
The water is dark and deep and sinister
yet the scene is one of peace-
Foliage lush and overgrown hangs over the river
     and an old tree leans into the water
        and growing everywhere are yellow buttercups
             purple nettle and white daisies-
Ophelia holds a bouquet in one hand
the other she holds up where once flowers she held
    the colorful blooms represent beauty and immortality-
Her rich brocade dress is sodden and heavy now
and her beautiful face sees only heaven-
                     Oh, my painters hand wants to continue
to paint the beautiful decaying and ever blooming forest
    oh, over here more ferns . . . 
         more red poppies.. some purple, some white
             more, more, more-
My hand is an extension of my mind, I have lost control,
time is nothing, time is suspended and I paint . . .
and my pseudo shall be Beauty-

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June 19, 2017

Free Verse/Landscape
Copyright Protected, ID 910910


Landscape
Kim Rodriques

First Place

Inspiration - John Everett Millais, Ophelia, 1851/52
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

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Barden Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 8:43 PM
What a wonderful snippet of Hamlet, turned into a painting of extraordinary description ... loved it! Congrats on the win!
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 10:58 PM
Nice job :) Congrats on the win!!
Nusker Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 10:48 PM
Beautifully painted poem. Congrats on your win with this artwork.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 7:49 PM
How sadness and beauty blend! Congrats on your win in my contest, Constance!
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Very well done with this. So many nice lines. You reached me with the painting too. Nice :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Bonjour, Constance! You have delivered an exquisite write here today! Very inspiring indeed! Take care and all the best!
Green Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 9:22 AM
This was beautiful my friend, such a mesmerizing piece that brings the beauty of life, the colors, the feelings and the emotions flowing softly before my eyes. Really nicely done.
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