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Deep in a forest a river flows and there floats Ophelia, in death- There is a deep silence, a hush and beauty in the landscape, deep green water grass and drifting jade moss so soft and delicate like satin it seems- The water is dark and deep and sinister yet the scene is one of peace- Foliage lush and overgrown hangs over the river and an old tree leans into the water and growing everywhere are yellow buttercups purple nettle and white daisies- Ophelia holds a bouquet in one hand the other she holds up where once flowers she held the colorful blooms represent beauty and immortality- Her rich brocade dress is sodden and heavy now and her beautiful face sees only heaven- Oh, my painters hand wants to continue to paint the beautiful decaying and ever blooming forest oh, over here more ferns . . . more red poppies.. some purple, some white more, more, more- My hand is an extension of my mind, I have lost control, time is nothing, time is suspended and I paint . . . and my pseudo shall be Beauty- _______________________________ June 19, 2017 Free Verse/Landscape Copyright Protected, ID 910910 Landscape Kim Rodriques First Place Inspiration - John Everett Millais, Ophelia, 1851/52

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Date: 6/30/2017 8:43:00 PM
What a wonderful snippet of Hamlet, turned into a painting of extraordinary description ... loved it! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 6/29/2017 10:58:00 PM
Nice job :) Congrats on the win!!
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Date: 6/29/2017 10:48:00 PM
Beautifully painted poem. Congrats on your win with this artwork.
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Date: 6/29/2017 7:49:00 PM
How sadness and beauty blend! Congrats on your win in my contest, Constance!
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:29:00 AM
Very well done with this. So many nice lines. You reached me with the painting too. Nice :)
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Date: 6/19/2017 10:50:00 AM
Bonjour, Constance! You have delivered an exquisite write here today! Very inspiring indeed! Take care and all the best!
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Date: 6/19/2017 9:22:00 AM
This was beautiful my friend, such a mesmerizing piece that brings the beauty of life, the colors, the feelings and the emotions flowing softly before my eyes. Really nicely done.
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