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" MELTING OF ICE " FREE PHOTO.

May be an image of body of water, arctic and nature

Icebergs are melting Sea level is rising fast-- Bleak the land's future!* © Demetrios Trifiatis 08 November 2022 - *Science has established, beyond doubt, that the window for climate action is closing rapidly. Thus from the 6th of November 2022, world leaders are meeting in Sharm El-Sheikh, Egypt, for two weeks of climate negotiations to cut carbon emissions so that our planet is saved. This Haiku is my tiny contribution.

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Date: 11/14/2022 3:02:00 PM
Thank you for spreading the word and doing your part, Demetrious. Bill
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Date: 11/8/2022 5:38:00 AM
Dear friend Demetrios, your writing is poignant and intelligent. Climate change is a major issue in our modern society. And as we've seen, Earth isn't taking this death lying down; she's putting up a fight in the form of floods, fires, and smog.
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Date: 11/8/2022 11:54:00 AM
Yes, mother earth puts up a fight to eradicate cancer that has grown within her: MAN! Earth will survive but Man will vanish. Thank you for your gracious comment, my dearest friend, Lasaad!. Be blessed!
Date: 11/8/2022 5:26:00 AM
I like what one of the speakers said, we're heading for climate hell with our foot on the accelerator, how true that is. I can't see all those Factories that produce clouds of smoke and toxic waste stopping anytime soon. But mother earth is dying and is fighting back, evidence we've seen already, with floods, wildfires and air pollution. Tom
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Date: 11/8/2022 11:50:00 AM
The speaker, my dearest, Tom, was the United Nations Secretary-General António Guterres. I think he described the situation so graphically that everyone should listen if he wishes our planet and us to stay alive! Thank you for your comment. Be blessed!
Date: 11/8/2022 5:26:00 AM
A warning the world should heed. Hope they are listening to your message my friend.
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Date: 11/8/2022 11:41:00 AM
My first poem on the subject was written back in 1985 when I restarted writing poetry. One day I will repost it. Unfortunately, most people do not believe there exist such problem. Thank you for caring. Blessings.
Date: 11/8/2022 4:51:00 AM
Love that last line, Demetrios. What a great haiku, my friend. Charlie
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Date: 11/8/2022 11:37:00 AM
Charles, my friend, I am so glad to see you visiting and commenting. Thank you so much. Be blessed!
Date: 11/8/2022 1:08:00 AM
- We have to take this seriously ... excellently written my friend - hugs
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Date: 11/8/2022 4:21:00 AM
I am afraid that it is already too late, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Most of us humans, do not even realize the gravity of the problem. The coming generation is going to pay the price. Thank you for caring. God bless you.

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