Land

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(NOTE: This poem derived from texts of Hexagram 2 (Land/Receptive) of the I Ching, Keats "On A Dream", a Wiki article on summer solstice & a ScienceAlert article on Alzheimer research article (using various text manipulation techniques & editing the finally results to make it a little more readable and flowing)

Land.
neural storm potential
a sky day
Earth's eyes
so fortune

Land.
the noble time
my Earth split
invited misfortune
in whirlwind

Land.
calm is pale Sun
have its way
Being proceeds

Land.
a solstice knows sorrows
so its hell
so feathers toward summer
will tell

Land.
is outside
being and southern hemisphere
source beneficial

Land.
a master of whirlwind
continuous form
its gust
the sorrows

Land.
neural declination skies
so hail-stones
so light
northern hemisphere slept

Land.
the progress beneficial
solar flares erupt
they sleep
progress

Land.
gained the fortune
neural flowers' eventually progress
beneficial pure day
the Delphic sorrows in hell

Land.
away from my way
not moving sprightly
a circle of fortune

Land.
a pure gust
says move it
it storms
a split day

Land.
a lost flaw
snow and cold
it rains Ching
makes hail-stones

Land.
not a light
there the storm
not good
flaws wait to thaw

Land.
pale persistence
it is a mare
says the storm

Land.
A fortune
the sweet light
calm feathers

Land.
sad hail-stones
potential develops
proceeds calmly
the hell in lulled interests

Land.
a fair fortune
calm light
baffled skies
it sorrows

Land.
seeing rain not time
a hundred flowers
acquiring sorrows

Land.
a time with sleep
neuroleptic Delphic circle
the lovers of misfortune

Land.
floated once
a potential
the Source saw
pale progress

Land.
a lost day
so floated and baffled
so it goes to hell

Land.
a first and last
floated away and slept
without eyes

Land.
a lost southerly kiss
solstice lulled solstice
overhead
is Land

there will be
Land.

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