Lamington Lament

A chocolate lamington in a bakery hut,
     Was feeling down and in a rut,
 He found it hard getting off the tray,
      Felt he couldn't face the day,
Until the baker sprinkled on the coconut.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Wigley Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 2:10 AM
I have mornings like that, John. Fun Lim! Regards, Viv
Williams Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Clever comment Viv------thanks john
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