Laments of My Heart

I hear the voices you once bequeathed to me
Enchanting concert music in symphony of love
But I left the theater before the show was over
Walking all alone in the missteps of contempt,
Endorsing the reticence of unspoken words.

Deep in my psyche these memories now reside
Where devoid of fond smiles, blossoms have dried.

As I refuse to accept that I’ve lost you forever
Echoes of outcry from the unsung emotions
Poignantly evoke the saddest lines of discourse
In conversations espousing laments of my soul,

Within backstreets of mind amid chaos of thoughts
Having lost directions to dreamlands of the past,

For I refused the promise in winter’s goodbye
And rejected fiery passions of autumnal vibes,

As I squashed the dreams in flights of monarchs—
Never kissing fragrant lips of doting ambrosia.

Though you guided me through twilight of romance
I struggled in ineptitude of lovesick night of dark—

Oh, how I missed my mark beneath the northern star!

As my storm keeps churning, hosting a cyclone,
The rivers, once calm, have flooded my crops
And gusty winds ravaged dismantling my farm
And tall weeds have now occupied my sidewalks,

As dissonance of our love remorsefully squalls
Within indecisive nomenclature of my timid heart.

September 25, 2019
Placed 1st: In the backstreets of my mind poetry contest
Sponsor: Silent One
Placed 3rd: Strand select C contest by Brian Strand
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Mweetwa Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Beautiful writing. Congratulations.
Pandit Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 9:03 AM
Much appreciate Michelo--many thanks.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 4:38 PM
This is amazing Vijay! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : ) xxoo
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Thank you Connie--much appreciate.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Many thanks Caren--much appreciate.
May Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Well written Vijay, Congrats on your win
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Nicole Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Oh my, the corners of the mind- moments in the heart hold so many emotions indeed. It sounds like love lingers, yet it is free like the wind- all at the same time. The heart wants to hold one, but the mind is letting go. Your thoughts truly move me. Congratulations Vijay, on winning first place. Your words belong soaring through the sky. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:03 AM
Much appreciate the kind remarks Brandy..always a pleasure to read your analysis..and listen to your thoughts..many thanks.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Every chamber of your very heart tunes volumes! The complaint.. hurt.. and sadness allow every avid reader to dive deep inside a "timid heart" and feel its seasons.. No wonder this beauty is honoured First placement! My most sincere congratulations, dear Vijay on your Win! Cherished into my fave list.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:06 PM
A joy to read your cheerful feedback my friend..your thoughts always make my day. Much appreciate as always, Besma..many many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE. Regards. God bless!
Ball Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 9:46 AM
WoW Vijay. A very poignant piece relating the sadness and regret one lives with when the love they had is not appreciated enough to be returned and so that love starves from neglect and dies. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:04 PM
You are so very kind--much appreciate, Judy--many many thanks.
Gilmour Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 9:11 PM
How did I miss this masterpiece Vijay, truly wonderful and a well, deserved first place! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:03 PM
So appreciate your kind thoughts, Ann--many thanks for your visit and comments.
Proxenos Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Your comparison between leaving a love behind and leaving a theatre show before it ends is indeed very clever dear friend, passion pumps loud and clear in this write Vijay! A Fav. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Thank you so much my friend--much appreciate your kind thoughts.
Devonshire Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 11:42 AM
Leaving the theater is a great metaphor for walking out on a potentially promising love relationship, Vijay. I'd like to think people like this get a second chance at love and remember how much walking away from it affected his life. Beautifully penned, Vijay. Congrats on your win in Silent One's Contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks, Carolyn..many thanks for your visit and comments.
Kiser Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:23 PM
You out did yourself on this one Vijay; full of passion and emotion, it reads almost musically.
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Thank you MLK--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Theraven Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Vijay, I like this poem. "Oh, how I missed my mark beneath the northern star!" You hit the mark in this write. May you have a good harvest. -Richard
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:01 AM
So very kind of you Richard..many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 3:43 AM
- Congratulations !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:51 AM
Congratulations on penning a masterpiece Vijay! Well done! Wow! Bravo!
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Much appreciate Caren..so very kind of you..many thanks.
There Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 10:02 PM
No more lamenting, it's time to cheer :) Congratulations on this gorgeous piece of poetry!
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thank you HT for your return visit..appreciate the kind remarks.
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations on placing first in this poetry contest, Vijay. Your use of metaphor, imagery and appeal to emotions deserve mention. ~ Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Much appreciate Paul--many many thanks. Regards.
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Congratulations for your top win Vijay! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Thank you for your return visit Heidi--much appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:21 PM
wow, so many missteps to lament! Great descriptive writing as is your usual style, Vijay. Congrats on a well deserved first place win.
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks for your visit and comments.
Adams Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations on your first place win my friend...excellent writing :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:57 AM
Thank you for your return visit Sandy--much appreciate.
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:59 PM
Vijay congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem !
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:57 AM
Thank you Dear Heart..much appreciate.
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Congrats Vijay on another top win!
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Thank you for your return visit John--much appreciate.
One Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Damn, sometimes I read your poems and its like i could have wrote this one myself, but no where near as good as you... you always know how to write a deep and emotive poem for my contest... brilliant.. Congratulations on you first place in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:56 AM
That is so kind of you, SO..not easy for me to match your talented writes..many thanks for this splendid feedback..much appreciate.
Warrior Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Nice to visit...but not a good to live lol...great entry Vijay...^WW^ :o)
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thank you WW--much appreciate.
There Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 5:25 PM
This lovely bit of verse touches the soul very deeply, Vijay. Your expression throughout has left me in tears. A fav...
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:54 AM
So kind of you, HT..much appreciate..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Hamilton Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Wonderful phraseology eg reticence of unspoken words...doting ambrosia and the last couplet... pure poetry
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you John--appreciate your visit and comments.
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