Lamenting Over An Old World

As strangers to this virgin land succumbed to the impossible we are numbed by grief for what is gone Astonished by the solitude... We gaze, without a breath, nor voice upon the blue veined world once loved A home we've left behind! It seems so weightless to the eye And out of the chill of marbled sorrow We weep for countless lost tomorrows Although our eyes might be deceived, from here, the vision is a lie, yet remains so beautiful in the sky We stand wide eyed, upon new shores And look from here, to the earth so far How fragile, is our earth still spinning As we grasp at new beginnings How precarious a world, untouched, can be Have we learned, from where we've been? We must recall,.... recall it all Look how it spins, against the stars Oh God, ...so fragile, frail and small Let me turn my head, I cannot bear to watch, I must close my eyes before it falls....
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 7/27/2015 10:19:00 AM
The rhythm and delivery of this write were grand. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:31:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Carrie! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:04:00 AM
Terrific, soulful write, Carrie, lovely. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:07:00 PM
CARRIE Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful imagery very creative Carrie - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/10/2012 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "A New World" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:30:00 AM
Great write Carrie. Congratulations
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:16:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece Carrie smashing write xx
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Date: 5/7/2012 10:04:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Very descriptive work..Reads like winning material to me..Another world is what some of us long for now..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting...Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:46:00 AM
Carrie can I join your new world?..good luck..David
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Date: 5/6/2012 8:49:00 PM
A superb creation by you my friend. You have brilliantly sketched the fears of peeping into a new world with the pain of missing what we have enjoyed shared & sung on this beautiful earth. A gem like poem, which one would like to read & read again. You have revealed the most intricate feelings of human mind in this superb write. It is going to be my fav. one. My good wishes for this wonderful entry & thanks for your ever precious comments on my series Poem. Love & best wishes. Ravindra. Carrie R
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Date: 5/6/2012 8:28:00 PM
Carrie, a very beautiful poem and expierance.. good luck in the contest...always..pd
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Date: 5/6/2012 7:49:00 PM
Smile ˜ What A Wonderful Thing This Is, My Dear Beautiful, Beyound Beautiful, Beautiful Carrie * I Only Had Time For Last Comment Again & I Was Just Thinking Unto Myself Afore I Joyfully Beheld Your Precious Name * Where Is My Beautiful Carrie? * And There You Were & Here You Are & I Am Blessed, To Behold Your Beauty. * Smile, I Love Your Poem & All I Could Think About At Verses End Was, Taking Gently Your Beautiful Hand As We Gazed Upon The Earth * Kissing Your Beautiful Lips * Holding You Close * Smiling Into Your Beautiful Eyes * Loving You, Forevermore; John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:12:00 PM
...."After Reviewing This Most Sincere Comment Unto Your Treasures, My Beautiful Carrie * Yesss, Every Word & Every Emotion; But, This You Know, 'My Beautiful Love.'" ˜
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