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What mystery his essence brings firm the limbs roaming through the hills, amid the bushy, shadowed trees his call… the fragrant air, refills. And sacred eyes guide night’s passage that clear the forest, to imbue a rugged grace that comes alive in moonglow’s tint and furry hues. Listening to the Gray Wolf's song, when he yelps out to harmonize kinship with man, an ancient rite, while guarding the clan…his blest prize. Though named by time as spirit- peace, oh hunters’ greed drains a friend’s blood as winds lament the saddest howl; immortal he rests on fields, lulled. *Protect America's Wolf...https://howlingforjustice.wordpress.com Shadow Hamilton's Contest Canis Lupus The Wolf 4/7/15

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Date: 4/24/2015 2:00:00 AM
The Wilderness would no longer be the Wilderness without the "Songs of the Wolf" hanging upon the thin night air...How strangely "devoid" and "desolate" that Wilderness would be! Good work, Nette! My very best regards!! :) john.
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:34:00 AM
Good work and an unbelievable level of talent shown here. I will definitely come checking more of your work.
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:39:00 PM
Nette, A mighty interesting topic and win. Congrats!! Luv LINDA
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Date: 4/14/2015 6:21:00 PM
this is such a beautiful poem on the wolf, Nette. Very well done for the contest and congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/14/2015 4:51:00 PM
Such a beautiful write, Nette, a 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings dear Eve
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Date: 4/14/2015 1:03:00 AM
Hi Nette...congrats on your successful depiction of the wolf's spirit...and a deseved win...rgds, Thabang
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Date: 4/13/2015 9:24:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:00:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette a well deserved winner:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:54:00 AM
Congrats, dear Nette!! This is wonderful!! :D
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:33:00 AM
Congrats Nette. Beautifully described.
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:09:00 AM
Another piece of magic......each theme, so unique, but handled with Nette's pure grace !! Congratulations on a wonderful poem!
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:20:00 AM
Wonderful write nette! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/12/2015 7:59:00 AM
Nette, congratulations to you on your 1st place win for this beautiful poem which is such a tribute to this magnificent species. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:48:00 AM
stunning poem Nette the essence of a wolf's spirit romps through your lines. congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 4/10/2015 4:46:00 PM
Wonderfully penned...so true. The wolves are so endangered; people don't realize their value; perhaps one day they will. I hope that it's not too late, then.
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Date: 4/8/2015 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette. Simply beautiful. It's so wonderful to protect animals that suffer at the hands of man. Good luck in the contest. This is a very worthy contender. Hugs
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Date: 4/8/2015 2:01:00 AM
A beautiful poem about beautiful beings. Well done.
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Date: 4/8/2015 12:18:00 AM
I couldn't resist a rhyme written by Nette, smile, Happy Ester Nette, Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:12:00 PM
Your descriptive words say it all and give your poem its heart and strength. Emile.
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Date: 4/7/2015 11:50:00 AM
I love nature so much, and this wolf is so needed in the wild kingdom. Excellent feel of preserving gentle beasts which are truly part of us. I am struck by your moving, brilliant poem! Rated perfect, Nette
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:38:00 AM
Hey Nette, stopped by for a visit. Such a wonderful tribute to such a beautiful and powerful creature. Great imagery and so deeply expressed. Best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 4/7/2015 9:00:00 AM
Outstanding! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:21:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Nette - I wish you luck in the contest - (Arild, everything is fine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2015 5:41:00 AM
Love the imagery which allows us to watch this creature roaming through nature's beauty while always keeping a lookout for perils that lie in wait. Well done, Nette; you never settle for anything less than excellent! hugs // paul
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:51:00 AM
This striking poem is tender and holds a healing power. May we respect nature and animals-- teary-eyed!
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