Lament of the Lately Bereaved

When I found you in bed, you had just died.
     I wept; my grieving lodged inside my head;
you clearly were gone—I was horrified!
     As you lay still in bed, utterly dead, 
the huge shock I felt could not be denied, 
     as tears gave way to muffled sobs and dread.

Mother, I always had longed for your love:
     you loved the one who never for you wept. 
When your tired spirit had risen above,
     I knew my tears were hopelessly inept;
meanwhile, we all assembled to remove
     your slumbering corpse as it quietly slept. 

Hours passed when we all gathered for your wake,
     a solemn event that was neither good
nor sane as we all tried (for pity's sake!)
     to offer our condolences if we could.
You laid there like marble—no more awake.
     A victim of fate, I felt like deadwood. 

The final day arrived: the ceremony
     was on Sunday, which was dark and sunless;  
dream-like, bizarre, and strange, all was eerie.
     Distraught, I was overwhelmed and bloodless!
As they gave your last rite and obsequy,
     I, too, died more than words could ever express.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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