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A Natural Ninette Contest ~ Sponsor: Kim Merryman

dawn
brightens
morning skies
her hand brushes
lambent shades of gold
soft hues of blue
hint of blush
painting
dawn

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/21/2023 10:57:00 AM

This is lovely Lin. So serene... Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/21/2023 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely painting with your words. Have a great day with your win............

Terry Miller

Date: 8/21/2023 1:59:00 AM

well composed ninette; congratulations.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 4:44:00 AM

Thanks for your congratulations, Terry.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2023 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 4:43:00 AM

Thanks a whole lot, Sara.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/20/2023 12:44:00 PM

Ah yes I remember this one Lin, I absolutely loved it and it also inspired me to write one for the contest too, congratulations on well deserved first place in contest, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 4:43:00 AM

To be a source of inspiration to another poet is a fine compliment. To be a source of inspiration to you... this poem dances in the rain. Merci beaucoup, mon ami.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2023 9:40:00 AM

- Lovely written, Lin :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 4:41:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/20/2023 2:53:00 AM

A lovely Ninette Lin, congratulations on your win… Belle

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 4:41:00 AM

and a lovely comment. Thank you, Belle.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/19/2023 6:30:00 PM

Excellent work, Lin, congratulations:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 4:41:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Jo.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/19/2023 3:59:00 PM

Lin, back to congratulate you on your first place win! Hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2023 4:02:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. I saw your name on the list so I’ll be visiting your poem again.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2023 2:39:00 PM

Lin, Congrats on 1st place in my contest! Your ninette was filled with stunning imagery and had a lyrical flow to it! Just beautiful! Blessings, Kim M

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2023 3:04:00 PM

Kim, I am sincerely delighted that you found my ninette worthy of a winning spot in your contest. Thank you ever so much.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/13/2023 5:14:00 AM

Lin, a beautiful poem, love the colorful imagery! hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2023 3:02:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Tania.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2023 4:55:00 AM

Absolutely stunning imagery Lin and the picture is gorgeous I too love 'lambent shaded of gold' so descriptive! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2023 3:01:00 PM

Thank you many times over. Jan.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/12/2023 10:45:00 AM

So picturesque, love 'soft hues of blue' and 'painting dawn' - very effective ninette~

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2023 12:58:00 PM

Hi Michelle and thank you ever so sincerely for your kind remarks.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/12/2023 10:13:00 AM

Effortless Lin, just like the picture you describe, A natural Ninette and more, with depth and artistry, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2023 10:47:00 AM

It may seem so, but I played around with it for some time this morning before I settled on having dawn used as first and last word. It worked best in my mind, and so it was written. Thank you for your consistent reading and generous comments, David. I appreciate you.

Lambent Shades of Gold

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