Lake Moments

Not sure what it is
about this land
that grabs you
but I was grabbed
long ago.

Trip ends today,
last night I stayed up late, 
sipping remaining whisky
as the red sun set 
neath hill's dark shoulders.

Crisp morning
up before six
lake like glass
rustle up the fire
and make coffee.

Rest of camp
sound asleep
so I solo
cast the back bay
release a hammer handle
then troll the north shore
into a freshening wind
nothing.

Move out 
to deeper water
perhaps a morning walleye
but the wind’s up, 
and  the sparkling sun 
puts fish down
still nothing.

End of lake
head back
cast the shoreline
snag a bush
retrieve the lure
test line – it snaps.
Retie, change lures, 
Tom got a good fish 
in these narrows
but today  
nothing.

Ignore my watch, 
change to a deeper lure
last point, a satisfying tug
good pike – strong fish
open water, use net
she’s mine.

Paddle back to camp
with fresh fillets for home 
and memories
of when the lake
and I were one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marie Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 8:22 PM
There is such Peace in your words that 'my words' are unnecessary. You express a sublime serenity that brings back fond memories. The first verse says it All:-) Beautiful writing, fave 7+ lynnxxx
Rodgers Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Thanks Lynn
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July 11, 2015 at 3:11 AM
Dave :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Rodgers Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Thanks SKAT. Is it coincidence or fate that this show up just as I'm preparing for another canoe trip?
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:23 AM
I enjoyed spending this moment with you Dave. Congrats on having this featured!
Rodgers Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 8:04 AM
Thanks Connnie, I'm always happy to share a moment. Dave
Lindley Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 10:21 PM
Truly enjoyed this write about fishing. I have not been fishing in about 12 years now. Gave up hunting about 7 years ago. Your words brought back many pleasant memories. Thanks.
Rodgers Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Robert, good to know it touched a chord.
Mehta Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 5:31 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Dave
Rodgers Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Thanks Dr. M
A. Sharma Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Great poem Aberfoyle ! Yes we must ignore watch sometimes while we r enjoying what we r good at , congrats on win !
Rodgers Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma - yes sometimes time away from our busy schedules, computer and much of life's business can over new insights.
Gorelick Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 10:36 PM
sure enjoyed this one..nice ending, when you and the lake were one. Congrats. BG
Rodgers Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 10:28 PM
Thanks Barbara, ice out is late here, but the waters are open I hope to be back to one soon.
Kos Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations on winning this contest. This poem is superb.
Rodgers Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Thanks Ivo. I'm glad it grabbed something in you.
A   Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Aberfoyle Dave, . Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA
Rodgers Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:19 PM
Linda, Thanks, as always your comments are most appreciated. Dave
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 12:37 PM
I lived in Parry Sound when I was a kid. I had a teacher by the name of Mr. Lake who helped set me on the right path.
Pettit Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:03 AM
You describe a beautiful scenario here.
Rodgers Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:27 AM
Thanks
Lamoureux Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 10:05 AM
This makes me think of my former home in Northern Ontario. I was born in Kirkland lake.
Rodgers Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Thanks, the lake in question in N of Parry Sound but well S of Kirkland Lake. WE are privileged to have these lakes still available.
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 10:48 AM
- A truly beautiful natural pearl - enjoy it! - Thank you for sharing this beautiful image in your thoughts and words of Roger. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Rodgers Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Thanks for your comments.
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