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Tania Kitchin's Nature haiku - Ocean, Lake or River' Contest'...25 Jul 26

lake


crossing an old lake
       gulls warble on dazzled coast ~

     springtime serenade

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2026

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Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2026 at 11:21 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely win poem in the contest, Nette :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

August 2, 2026 at 7:06 PM

Loved your pretty Ku, dear. Back for Congrats to you 🌹

August 2, 2026 at 2:44 PM

Nette, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely lake haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2026 at 1:20 AM

An idyllic scene, Nette. Great job

July 26, 2026 at 4:04 AM

I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Nette. It reads like a good contender to me. I really like the sound of seagulls, but it has been a long time since I have heard any. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Way to go. Sara K.

July 25, 2026 at 9:44 PM

lovely Haiku

July 25, 2026 at 1:39 AM

Sublime word choice, imagery, and alliteration. Enjoyed this one, Nette. Good luck with it. Howard

Alison A Smith nee Howarth

July 25, 2026 at 12:06 AM

Very well worded haiku

July 24, 2026 at 10:06 PM

I can just see the gulls! Great job!

July 24, 2026 at 9:19 PM

A beautiful haiku. Over the lake and ocean, sea gulls flying and singing is a common sight.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

July 24, 2026 at 9:02 PM

Very nice!

July 24, 2026 at 8:03 PM

Pretty!

Constance La France

July 24, 2026 at 7:42 PM

Nette, beautiful haiku, I opened my contest again, please enter, sending you a soupie~

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