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Lonely hearts fall victim to deceit and flattering lies designed to please. Sincerity is a delusion; and forever dreams are but a tease. Doubt stirs up currents of disbelief; cutting trust adrift in unsafe realms. And the wailing of a naive heart; mimics the wind crying in the elms. The young sugarcoat reality; trying to dilute its bitter taste. But, when happiness seeks compromise; youth's illusions are soon laid to waste. You are tired of feeling incomplete; while yesterday's, rewind and replay. And anxieties begin to rise; facing feelings you once hid away. You search lost feelings for crumbs of truth, having lost trust somewhere in the past. And yet, in time, fantasies reshape; while heartaches slip away at last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2018 10:24:00 AM
Great imagery with signs of hope. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 9/3/2016 4:11:00 PM
This is wonderful Emile, I do so enjoy reading your writes, their flow is a joy and a pleasure.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/3/2016 6:10:00 PM
Thanks John, you've brought a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 9/3/2016 11:11:00 AM
Emile, this is so beautiful, heart wrenching :)-luloo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/3/2016 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/2/2016 10:13:00 PM
Emile this is amazing amazing poetry. The words drip with emotion. A7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/3/2016 8:04:00 AM
Thank you my friend, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.

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