Lady of the Night!

Your body men desire
It fills them full of fire
They want so much
To feel the touch
The gifts you have for hire.

You walk the streets so dark
Your future bleak and stark
You work for bugs
To buy the drugs
That really hit the mark.

Your pimp is a drug dealer
A professional money stealer
You feel the pain
Hooked on cocaine
He is your true fate-sealer.

You passing nobody to mourn
Thirty years since you were born
You only know your punter
Who really was your hunter
But it’s you the people scorn!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Darling Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Dragging some reality into daylight! I really enjoyed that!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 10:42 PM
The vicious circle...i wonder where the society is heading, when we eradicate a problem we keep the root to give it a new name and find it a problem again...it reminds me of my poem denouement. Well done. Sunita :)
Kimathi Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 7:59 AM
I can relate with your verse... Congrats Roger, for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
Arnone Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Sad, but (in most cases) true. A relevant and well-written poem....
Mason Gibbs Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Wow! that speaks volumns, very good poem.
A  Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 4:12 AM
I like this Roger, I bet you are good when writing romantic poems for women. ;) This is deep and has a cool twist...... LOVE SKAT
Roberts Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 10:07 PM
very deep topic, well put, interesting use of limerick style, I enjoyed it
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Well u covered all the bases of that kind of life Roger.. enjoyable read in the Limerick form.. and yur rhyme is super..Souper.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Fillmore Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 2:36 PM
it shows the desperation of these women, who feel there's no out, at least not easily.
Harrison Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 10:25 PM
Very dark and sinister, your poem is for The Lady of The Night.
Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 2:35 PM
So many young women take to the streets and face the trials you describe so well in your rhyme, Roger. But shouldn't those who "hire" these women accept an equal amount of scorn? They say prostitution is the world's oldest profession, but it is also one of the saddest. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
Palli Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 11:59 AM
such a sad reality in this difficult world. Well written.
Corazon Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:24 PM
nice. very clearly worded. keep the creativity flowing through.
Iyer Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:13 AM
I could feel the pain in your poetic lines, regards suresh
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:46 AM
Kool quad Limerick Roger, a so out there situation in our society. It's the oldest profession in the world. Have a great weekend >> James
Eggins Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:21 AM
Hmmm there is a sad satire to this one but I like it ... nice work Roger ... thanks for the comments on my poem its appreciated love Jayne
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 3:29 AM
A nice character drawn with fine expressions
Hales Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 2:20 AM
Oh loving your work full of inspiration love it love sarah x keep writing these love it...
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