Notes About The Poem

Inspired by the Fall. 

 

Lady Autumn

Lady Autumn lies discarded now.
Her stick- like bones
are on the ground where they had blown. 
Fiery colors of her  leafy dresses
lie in brown, heaped on frosted icy ground.  
Sparkling gossamer that held her hair in ivied wreathes
unraveled by the bitter winds--
almost as if saying 
she can never dance again.  

But promises of spring, appear 
in tight buds on dry twigs
Blowing winds whisper secrets 
of  summer’s emerald green 
Trapped within a stone-cold, kingdom's 
dormant majesty. 

As Winter makes his stormy presence near,
she looks to fading crimson skies
and feels her spirit rise

~1st Place~
Contest: Standard Contest No. 120
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 10/02/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Beautiful imagery, Suzanne. Glad to have found your lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
Inman Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 5:51 PM
Beautiful write Suzanne sad but hopeful.
Delaney Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 7:15 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting. James; Most appreciated. SuZ
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Beautiful imagery with this superb personification, Suzanne. Congrats on your top win.
Gondolf Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Wonderful imagery in this seasonal poem, SuZ, congrats on your win. John
May Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 6:27 PM
The promise of another season is blowing in the wind..Congrats on your win Suzanne
Delaney Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Dear Joseph: Thanks so much. Really made my morning. Best, SuZ
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Beautiful imagery, SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Thanks Line: I appreciate your support. Hugs, SuZ
One Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Beautiful poem with great imagery.. such a shame you do not post more..
Delaney Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Hi Silent One: Hoping to write and post more after Christmas. Such a busy 18 months for me. Re-locating, renovations and travel. Sorry I haven’t had as much time to spend here reading and commenting as in the past. Be well and thanks for your kind comments always. SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 5:09 AM
Well Suz, you know how much I love this one being that it won poet of the week at PFT. It is a beautiful autumn treasure! : ) 7
May Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Beautifully penned Suzanne...best wishes
Callus Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Beautifully expressed, Suzanne! For some strange reason autumn seems to appeal to our emotions more than all the other seasons. Her departure is deeply felt. ~ Take care & warm regards // paul
Anish Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Fine seasonal poetry here! I am glad I checked out your work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 7:10 PM
a FAVE back at ya. It doesn't get better than this!!
Delaney Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Love ya. !!
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