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Ladies Be Weeping

The ladies are weeping for our big guy is sick offering our soup might just do the trick warm him inside boost up his pride soon he'll be chasing the ladies off with his stick

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Jack Ellison

Date: 10/14/2015 2:28:00 PM

You are fast becoming a limerick aficionado! You go my friend! A winner it was!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/12/2015 10:59:00 AM

Yep! That's our LimmerJack! Dragon's already starting to call him Santa Jack, and making his list saying it's never too early. For Halloween he says he wants to be a blinged out TRex movie star... DUH... Doesn't need a costume for that one! He and Grandpa Troll say it's all in the details. His penguins will be little raptors running around him. Probably like little ducks in a row... is my guess. This is going to be sooo cute! Grandpa Troll will take them around as FrankenTroll. Gotta love em!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/11/2015 11:35:00 PM

Good one Tim! :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/9/2015 2:29:00 PM

Lol! I didn't know our Santa is sick// If I knew I would have come home quick// to prepare him some soup// stop his bouts with the poop//He'll be chasing YOU for being naughty, with a stick!