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Lacustrine Opera Premiere Contest Winner

In the pristine jade landscape the terrain rolls undulating... the panorama of pristine cadence, on its entrenched earthen cradle shaped for a serene lake… sublimely supine sparkling, the sapphire crystal face looks up toward the cerulean sky... mesmerized. The gliding southern zephyr whispers an enticing melody to the dancing ripples… intensely passionate concentric rhythm, sliding on the slithering shadows of trees, lining the contours of the lapping shore... adorned. The wavering lotus leaves float on the vibration of pulsating fervor, the full bloom scarlet flush of flower makes the collage of a fiery tapestry with the feathers of flaming flamingos, their ballerina legs wading the emerald waters in avian grace, their supple napes swiveling in arty show of aquatic ballet... surreal. In the hypnotic gleam of the setting sun I watch the lacustrine opera… enthralled. May 10, 2021 Contest : Nature Sponsor : Regina McIntosh

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Date: 1/12/2024 2:05:00 AM
Hi Subimal, This poem was also first place winner in my contest "Intensity" back in 2016, so I was pleased to find it popping up as a winner again in 2021. I've only just discovered your extra win. (I am hoping my comment will remind you to put your placement in MY contest beneath your poem as well. After all, your inspiration was drawn from the earlier contest set up by me.)
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Date: 5/12/2021 4:42:00 PM
Dear Subimal, my heart’s imagination was swept up and away by the “gliding southern zephyr” in this enthralling sensory feast. Exquisite poetry. Beautiful, vivid, vibrant yet dreamy! Congratulations for your excellent win in Regina’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:30:00 PM
"Gliding southern zephyr..." Wow, beautiful phrases. Congratulations on your win, Subimal!!
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:08:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/11/2021 4:31:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Congrats on your win. This is incredible. Love it. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 1/7/2020 10:10:00 PM
Great write - wow! Blessings and congrats on your win in John's contest, Subimal - keep on writing, my friend, and thank you for sharing. Blessings! :o)
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Date: 1/5/2020 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:39:00 PM
And again back with congratulations for a top win my friend!;)
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:25:00 PM
Subimal...this is perhaps your best writing, I'm speechless to describe the beauty and quality of your word selection. Congrats on a top win in my best of2019 contest!
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Date: 11/20/2019 3:55:00 PM
Subimal congratulations on your win in my writing challenge!
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Date: 6/7/2019 8:58:00 PM
Subimal wonderful work! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 6/7/2019 5:49:00 PM
I am glad you entered this in Brian's contest as I missed reading this work of art. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement Subimal! Exquisite work! xxoo : )
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Date: 4/27/2019 5:26:00 PM
Such amazing imagery, Subimal! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/25/2019 1:48:00 PM
'Imaginative' understates what you've accomplished, but I am left with that wholly inadequate word to offer my congratulations on a scintillating write and a spectacular win! Congrats! ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/25/2019 12:08:00 PM
What a feast of imagery. Well deserved gold medal winner, Subimal. Congrats!
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Date: 4/5/2019 11:31:00 AM
This is so lovely Subimal...the graceful imagery, a peaceful vision set to the music of nature's sounds. I hope this does well in the contest. Have a lovely Easter. xxoo
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Date: 4/10/2019 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Connie for your visit and nice comments. Much appreciated.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/10/2019 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Connie for your visit and nice comments. Much appreciated.

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