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Lackadaisically Lackluster

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You lack what I have. You can't have it back, because your lack is my gain. Lacks define your success. The less you have the better. But, a life with too many lacks is lackluster, a life spent lolling and loitering is lackadaisical bliss. It is a half-hearted half-life, ruined by deficiencies. So count your lacks, one by one and get rid of them. Be fulfilled as you fill your lacks, like a dentist fills cavities.

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Date: 5/9/2017 7:41:00 AM
John, Tick tack, I want my lack back, did you take off my rack jack? Good poem
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