Laborious Hands

Labor-painted lines on your hands
Heat- bleached your shiny strands
Mud added deeper color to your brand
Your adornments are dusts of the ground.



Skin piled up that made your hands rough.
Covered them and made them thick and tough.
Nail had grown to give a better grasp
To whatever you aim to feel and touch.



Wrinkled palms yet I still long its caress.
Soothe the cracks that this soul hardly bears.
Holds my head up when I’m bowing with fears.
Pulling me through the darkness of my twenty one years.




Yet when the poisonous blood entered its veins,
The strength and might were all been eaten.
Creating a space of life and death in between
And made your laborious hands weak and trembling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 18, 2014 at 3:21 PM
Emer, thank you for the reply..PD
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July 9, 2014 at 12:26 AM
Emer, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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July 7, 2014 at 8:08 PM
Emer,,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 5, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Emer. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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June 29, 2014 at 7:57 AM
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR positive comments, i'll be posting poems soon.take care
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June 28, 2014 at 11:16 PM
Emer, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Capate Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 10:29 AM
hi linda, thanks for your generous comments
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June 28, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Hi Emer, this is such a powerful poetic gem! Keep rolling them out, my friend! Best wishes.
Capate Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 10:31 AM
hi pandita, its nice to know people who knows how to appreciate, thanks, love to see yuor comments as well on my new poems, :)
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 12:36 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Emer :) - I choose your first VERY WELL written poem !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Capate Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 10:32 AM
hi anne lise, thanks. its nice to be here
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Wow!!! :) what a reflective inspiring poem is this..:) I like best you first and third stanzas..:) WARM WELCOME on POETRYSOUP!! I am Olive and I want to welcome you here.:) I want to tell you that I have allot of fun here and learning .:) as you will roam around you will meet lots of nice people too..:) I hope you will enjoy it here as I am since two years ago..:)
Capate Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 10:29 AM
THANKS OLIVE. i know youre a pinay.you have lots of poems in ur page
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June 28, 2014 at 11:24 AM
And here you will see lots of Pinoys and Pinays too..:) like me..:)
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