Laborer's Ode Ii - Bottled-Up Future

In his mid-30s but still a boy

Given $14.50 an hour and 12 hour shifts
Six days a week

His driver’s license confiscated
For five slung beers over a night long ago

Cost him $10,000
Contributed to the system
Of judges bailiffs lawyers and Presidents
All residents
Of the lakes and new mansions up north on weekends

Five years it will take him
To pay them for his sin.

Out here on the way to work
There are no buses
So the boy joins a line of third world refugees

Walking an hour and a half a day
Each way
Through the sweat of summer
And the snow of winter
From Greatdale Apartments
To the soda pop company’s bottling plant

He limps down the shoulder of King’s Road
Texting a screen scream to his desperate dad
“I can’t do this anymore!”

This
The only demand the son can manage

While Escalades
Roar by him
Side mirrors whisking within inches of his elbows

The thought of the American Dream
Or even the idea of a violent union revolution
Pouring out of him

Like his 10 cent returns
After work at the Party Store.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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