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La Rose Onirique

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Fields of flowing, fresh flowers, in nascent dreams, Huge mug of coffee, such sensual incense to my nose. Fresh, hiily, waving, scented grass in rows of joyful teams Spring-blue skies, scent of la rose oniriqie, on my clothes! 4-4-2024

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Chantelle Cooke

Date: 4/10/2024 8:55:00 AM

Wow! What imagery in this gem of a poem! Cannot pick a favorite! A poem interwoven incredible poetic terms too. Love and Blessings Chantelle

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/20/2024 8:35:00 PM

Chantelle, i never saw this comment! Till today, 4/20., maybe would be a good idea if you soup mailed me whoever you commented? Just put in poem name. I hope alls well with youi….Inwill soup mail you when I comment to yours. Hopoe get to read the POTD, Romeo, and Juliet from February. H, So glad you liked this one…me, too? Pangie xx

Paige Hind

Date: 4/8/2024 6:49:00 PM

I love my coffee- I am drinking some now lol

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/20/2024 8:42:00 PM

That makes two of us Paige. I never saw your comment either,,,,,apologies thank you Hugs,pangie…xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/6/2024 8:23:00 PM

I love this poem, and I'll make sure my nose - line two - stays out of your clothes - line four. lol. Flowers and fragrance, Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/7/2024 5:13:00 AM

Hi Gershon! Glad you liked this one..lol ditto on liine two and four!)))this was a hoy to create. I dont write to inpress anyone. Life is more fun that way. And the truth is, I can’t anyway.. remeber? Have obly one chapter done, pangiexx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/5/2024 2:32:00 PM

Nothing is more enchanting than a perfect day as this poem relates. A cup of coffee at leisure sounds idyllic.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/5/2024 3:52:00 PM

Nature can be devastatingly awesome! I do agree thar potent mug of cofffee, would be perfect. It was written to be idyllic? Thanks, hhilda Pangie xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/4/2024 5:47:00 PM

Dearest Pangie, you have beautifully captured the essence of spring and the enchanting imagery of nascent dreams and fresh flowers. The sensory details, from the aroma of coffee to the scent of grass, evoke a picture of a tranquil moment in nature. I loved your imagery of the spring-blue skies and the rose on your clothes which adds a touch of whimsy and magic to the scene. Pangie, what a delightful and evocative piece, A Fav!. - Blessings, Daniel

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/4/2024 6:25:00 PM

I am deeply touched by all your words! I was about to remove it! You see it with changes that really improved it . And on this very nice Spring day. late this afternoon, we were hit bt a heavy hailstorm! The oranges were clinging to the trees in the backyard. Yet, the ground was filled with ice. It was so odd..You made the ice melt, and my heart for sure. By faving this. Enjoy these Spring days, Daniel! Pangie xx

David Fisher

Date: 4/4/2024 4:46:00 PM

You paint a lovely picture in this poem. I went to look up rose onirique, and your poem already comes up as the first item. We had an inch of snow, so your poem warms the heart, Pangie.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/4/2024 5:41:00 PM

Very awesome news, David! In HS, i had four years of Latin. French, zilch. So,I had to look that up today! You warm my heart telling me it was the first entry, I love Piaf and Aznavour. In SF, my friends were from Paris. Writing non fiction comes close to my days as an improv standup comedienne. No one liners, ever! No cleverness, just being myself worked! We had a horrid hailstorm here. Stay warm. Pangie xx

Regina Elliott

Date: 4/4/2024 2:24:00 PM

Delightful springtide joy, dear Pangie. This has brought me back to my youth. So full of the April-blessed senses. Bravissimo! xoxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/4/2024 2:35:00 PM

Holy Smokes, hope you got to see the image! I don’t know why this image enchanted me. I have no explanation!))) But I do agree with you, that Spring and youth do a magical dance. Like teens blessed by their first romance. What a delightful comment, from a great friend!…. Pangie xxx