La Paloma

The splayed light of an obliging red sunset
lays upon the darkening meadow
of windswept grass

Slow-moving fingers in a visible dance
wrap in quiet space
when moonlight, silhouettes our hands
as they bond

A falling star etches the night sky
burning its canvas like a struck match
vanishing as quickly as it came

The rush of life abates to a small distance
so we can free ourselves from outgrown nests
to float like doves on tender breezes
until we can fly when love is found
to lift the subtle wings of our soul


7/14/19
11/18/19 contest Writing Challenge 2, November
A Poem Meaningful
sponsor Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode
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Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:26 PM
wow, how beautiful this is, Frederic. Congrats on your great placement.
Hamilton Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Another beautiful write Frederic, glad this was justly recognized and rewarded with a top win!
Na Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Congrats on your win Frederic
La France Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem and I love the music too !
One Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 4:36 PM
yet another great love poem with so many romantic lines..
Sands Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 7:15 PM
This is so nice Frederic. Beautifully written :)
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 5:19 PM
a beautiful love poem Frederic - the music makes me cry its a childhood favourite:-) hugs Jan xx
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