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La Bella Luna!

You display your beauty like a rose, your appearance, at first frail and ghostly, blooms to fuller view in a sky studded with stars. O Maiden Of Mystery! home of stillborn assignations, misspent dreams and lovers' convocations, fired with all the grief you can distill, and all the joy. You haunt the heavens, blithe and beauteous, even when unseen your hold is mighty, mistress of the menstrual flow, the driving force behind each woman's mood and machination. The sun shall lose her heat and bleed to death e'er you dissolve, expend your final breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/10/2009 9:07:00 AM
Keith, awesome description of the moon! Last night, the moon appeared full and it is truly a great source of inspiration, isn't it? Enchanting images. My favorite line is "mistress of the menstrual flow." (Gave me a chuckle.) I've read many of your great poems, Keith. Look forward to reading more; keep writing! Into my faves this goes. Thanks for letting me know "Dolphins Dance" is the title of a jazz tune. I imagine it's quite lively. My late husband loved jazz. Best to you, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2009 3:48:00 PM
How did I miss this enchanting poem earlier? This is one of the best I've read of the moon and it's many moods. ~ Excellent ! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/27/2009 4:07:00 PM
Even affects the seas. Vince
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Date: 1/24/2009 12:01:00 PM
Keith, this is wonderful...the picture you paint, the mood you create. I especially love: "You haunt the heavens, blithe and beauteous, even when unseen your hold is mighty," Many nights I sit and take in the moon from my front porch swing. It most definitely can set a mood--a tone to the evening. I LOVE this! Donna G.
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments the other day i wrote a comment... but my computer went dead... i like your appreciations! The beautiful moon - i like a catchy title, that’s what makes me read poems... and you have a very good talent of expressing life around us... so poetically!! Have you written anything about the sun??
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Date: 1/23/2009 7:53:00 AM
Beautiful writing Keith.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/23/2009 5:50:00 AM
Mistress of the menstrual flow...I am so blown away by your ability to make words speak. Very talented you are.
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Date: 1/22/2009 4:30:00 PM
to our beautiful moon you have given much glory. John H Loving III
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Date: 1/22/2009 1:56:00 PM
wow! wat a lovely tribute to the moon...nicely done, as always.....*Love Maryam**
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Date: 1/22/2009 11:54:00 AM
A perfect tribute to the moon, that captivates us so. This is a captivating write. You have a magic pen, Keith. Love, Robin
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Date: 1/22/2009 7:31:00 AM
Amazing! I agree, one of your very best. it is had to write a poem about the moon, as it's been done so many times before, but this is unique and brilliant. love, K
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Date: 1/22/2009 5:11:00 AM
Wow. The power and influence of the beautiful and enigmatic moon. Awesome write. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/22/2009 5:02:00 AM
I agree with Michelle, Keith. spellbinding indeed. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/22/2009 4:55:00 AM
You amaze me more and more with each of your writes, Keith! The 'moon' and her cycles..a magnificent personification! Have to recruit 'Mr Ponders' to say how wonderfully done this truly is.:) I feel dumbstruck, you're so masterful! Wishing you the best..God bless you and yours! Love, Mikki
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:07:00 AM
Great words nicely penned Keith, The moon is a beautiful thing...Raul
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