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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 March 12

 

*2nd Place*
Pick-A-Title, Vol 42
Contest Judged: 2024 March 18
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

 

Image: Hello Dolly (1969) by Frock Flicks

TBT: Hello Dolly (1969) – Frock Flicks
They all pranced through some broad-like avenue and they've placed apart from each other's course proved they stood full of airs and graces view from cameras balanced by those they knew endmost part of the resplendent concourse Those cut-and-dried to flick those cameras for the whole world's glimpse with covetous stares furthered their verve-like, polyamorous stayed flamboyance and maintained glamourous those who've known, curved away their classic glares. They've prolonged the night, they danced, fancy pants, on stage, showboating like catamarans him, up-market tux, her, something from France news crews grew silent, now they had no chance when finance asked, they became stammerers. Gone Hollywood, have we, fashionable they'd be high falutin' like Fig Newton Nick Nack Paddy Whack give that dog a loan his old man, "La-Di-Da", a rollin' Stone! Man-o-man, how do you guys put it on? Nouveau riche, --hardly, old money, --never pretentious finance witnessed and confirmed how can they survive, leave it to wander or perhaps it could be dumped to wonder still, they curved away, with chuckling affirmed. Nonetheless, leave it to them, there's something right or wrong, hear their song, da-da-da-DA! Be this black-and-white world so defining "Imagine all the people," imaging the creme de la creme and the la-di-da.

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Date: 3/19/2024 4:47:00 AM
Ah, another brilliant piece from you, William:-) Your poem was a clear standout out of the "La-Di-Da" theme. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/19/2024 8:58:00 AM
Naught a popularity choice apparently--oh well, tis bound to happen=thanks Eaward Aloha, William
Date: 3/19/2024 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your impressive win!
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Date: 3/19/2024 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, Karen. Seem naught to have been a hit parade for a choice to write about, oh well. Thanks, Karen. Aloha, William
Date: 3/12/2024 4:00:00 PM
such cleverness in your words and delightful play on words. I liked the image you painted with 'showboating like catamarans.' Very effective. Also liked 'Nick Nack Paddy Whack give that dog a loan his old man, "La-Di-Da", a rollin' Stone! Loved all the connections you made...wonderful job! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 3/12/2024 4:43:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Sara, for you have taken a jaunty roam through my field of yielding words--excellent, my friend. Aloha, William

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