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L-O-V-E-L-Y

Lovely is this day break, with a new dawns light hitting her face and my window sill. Opious traits can be discerned, as i kiss her lips, carrying the sweetest taste of amaretto. Very slowly i arise back into thought and nontheless delv Excitedly into the depth of emotion only her love can achieve. Lay your head down my rising angel, You shouldnt revel, even if so beautifully. Sleep tight my angel, Sleep tight my lovely...

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Date: 7/28/2012 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful Acrostic poem here...really love this poem..way to go Daniel!!!
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Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 8:50:00 AM
Lol..ok I see it now..those are pretty hard to do if you're one that strives for perfection.. :) keep writing!!
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Daniel Ashcraft
Date: 7/28/2012 10:22:00 AM
Thank you, i was trying to make it harder for myself by doing a double acrostic. But the length of the 2nd sentence kills it : /
Date: 7/27/2012 10:44:00 AM
Thank you guys for the support! ~Daniel
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Date: 7/26/2012 12:34:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Daniel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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