Kudzu

We were riding in the car near the Alabama line,
When I saw all over the trees a strange looking vine.

I wondered what it was, I didn’t have a clue.
I asked my mother what it was and she said, “That’s kudzu!”

We stopped at a rest area off I-59
It was surrounded by those kudzu vines.

Mom said to watch my brother Bill.
He was playing around rolling down a hill.

I was only halfway watching, we had just had a fight,
When suddenly my brother disappeared from sight.

I screamed for mom, I didn’t know what to do.
I’d just lost my little brother in the kudzu.

I didn’t go in, the vines were way too thick.
So I just called his name and poked with a stick.

I had almost given up when I heard a whine.
My brother came crawling out and he was just fine.


2005  For Worms in My Lunchbox Collection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Accept my congrats for the win, Laura
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March 25, 2010 at 2:19 AM
Laura, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Johnson Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 8:51 PM
I've heard of those nasty kudzu vines but they are not allowed near my garden. Very funny. Congratulations Joyce
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March 18, 2010 at 12:05 PM
congrats on the win, enjoyed!!
Freeman Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Congrats on #5 Laura. Agape, Moses
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March 18, 2010 at 7:31 AM
These vines drive folks here in North Florida crazy, Laura, and I really enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
White Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Great read- very brotherly too Congrats
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March 18, 2010 at 4:41 AM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem and placement in the Make Me Laugh contest.. a great write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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March 18, 2010 at 12:18 AM
Congratulations Laura, on your placement in the Poetry Soup member contest, “Make my HEAD fall off (L . O . L) Contest Sponsored by: ad Adelana[]”. Your poem is funny funny funny funny funny funny funny funny. LOL! You deserve some drum rolls! Your poetic humor shines. Laughingly, Dane Ann
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March 1, 2010 at 5:18 PM
LOL Very cute. I've seen kudzo that thick! Smiles. Nice one. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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February 28, 2010 at 5:56 PM
funny, yep that stuff grows 3 foot a day or something like that, in the warm months. it vould be the killer vine.
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