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Kryptonite

Crystallized red, gold, green nocuous clang of vertigo, bird-toons tweeting, knees on the rocks, rolling eyes, coverlet-lids closing, discovered in fetal position, cocooned in butterfly net. “Don’t you have to go to work?” “Have you eaten yet?” “Shouldn’t you use the bathroom?” “Your coffee’s gone cold.” Vortex of colors inside chromatic coma, schmoozing muse - her elixir mixed with vibrancy, deliciousness, chamomile. Rippling sounds of waterfalls, crooning creeks, sentient sleep. Lips murmuring as if in meditation, rambling in fevered state, alliterative, rhyming, tossing crumbs and cookies, tasting death and birth - primordial sampling, inordinate linguistics. Rip Van Winkle at your side. He’s been kryptonized, espoused likewise - in dreams and nightmares, terrorized and raptured by a sea of imagery of red, gold and green— might awaken in twenty years…twenty years that disappear. 9/21/2021

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Date: 10/30/2021 12:48:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim, for your win with a wonderful and expressive poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2021 3:38:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 10/22/2021 9:19:00 AM
Kim, your creativity is a winner! Blessings, Paulette
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2021 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Paulette!
Date: 10/21/2021 10:05:00 AM
Wonderful write. I love it so... such an original and just amazing. Love it. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/21/2021 10:05:00 AM
Also didn't horrify me at all this time.. I must have been reading something differently into it the last time :)
Date: 10/21/2021 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Kryptonite" is a creative story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed autumn day..................
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Date: 10/21/2021 7:59:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this making me .... think, reflect, and yes, be "kryptonized" by your choice of words, so amazing. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments, and my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Beata!
Date: 10/21/2021 5:50:00 AM
Great writing on the concept with a beautiful narration. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 9/27/2021 10:04:00 PM
so delicately penned "Vortex of colors inside chromatic coma, schmoozing muse - her elixir mixed with vibrancy, deliciousness, chamomile." WOW!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 9/23/2021 4:31:00 AM
Brilliant cum Praiseworthy. I admire. Love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2021 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Date: 9/22/2021 7:11:00 AM
Brilliant write but so horrifying too. God bless you Kim. Love to you, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2021 9:27:00 AM
Thank you! It’s not meant to be horrifying. :) God bless you, sweet Gina!
Date: 9/21/2021 7:15:00 AM
Save for "bird tunes tweeting" I should probably like to awaken - immediately! This is so interesting Kim! I really enjoyed, Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2021 8:33:00 AM
Happy Tuesday! Thank you, Mike!

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