Kryptonite

Crystallized red, gold, green nocuous clang
of vertigo, bird-toons tweeting, knees on the rocks,
rolling eyes, coverlet-lids closing, discovered
in fetal position, cocooned in butterfly net.

“Don’t you have to go to work?”

“Have you eaten yet?”

“Shouldn’t you use the bathroom?”

“Your coffee’s gone cold.”

Vortex of colors inside chromatic coma, schmoozing muse -
her elixir mixed with vibrancy, deliciousness, chamomile.

Rippling sounds of waterfalls, crooning creeks, sentient sleep.

Lips murmuring as if in meditation, rambling in fevered state,
alliterative, rhyming, tossing crumbs and cookies, tasting
death and birth - primordial sampling, inordinate linguistics.

Rip Van Winkle at your side. He’s been kryptonized,
espoused likewise - in dreams and nightmares, terrorized
and raptured by a sea of imagery of red, gold and green—
might awaken in twenty years…twenty years that disappear.

9/21/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 12:48 AM
Congratulations, Kim, for your win with a wonderful and expressive poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 3:38 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Calasibetta Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Kim, your creativity is a winner! Blessings, Paulette
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Paulette!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Wonderful write. I love it so... such an original and just amazing. Love it. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
Mcintosh Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Also didn't horrify me at all this time.. I must have been reading something differently into it the last time :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Kryptonite" is a creative story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed autumn day..................
Agustin Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this making me .... think, reflect, and yes, be "kryptonized" by your choice of words, so amazing. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments, and my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much, Beata!
Alex Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:50 AM
Great writing on the concept with a beautiful narration. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 10:04 PM
so delicately penned "Vortex of colors inside chromatic coma, schmoozing muse - her elixir mixed with vibrancy, deliciousness, chamomile." WOW!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Dutta Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 4:31 AM
Brilliant cum Praiseworthy. I admire. Love.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Brilliant write but so horrifying too. God bless you Kim. Love to you, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Thank you! It’s not meant to be horrifying. :) God bless you, sweet Gina!
Gentile Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Save for "bird tunes tweeting" I should probably like to awaken - immediately! This is so interesting Kim! I really enjoyed, Happy Tuesday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Happy Tuesday! Thank you, Mike!
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