Krill

Here I am...just a tiny Krill
   Alive and well, swimming still.


   I wasn't eaten like my buddy Hank
   Taken by a Beluga, before he went off to the tank.


   My only safety has been in our school
   One whale, however, can instantly reduce that pool.


   I always shudder at the thought of being eaten alive
   When all I want to do is swim and survive.


   But we Krill are so special in the food chain you see
   I don't know if I will see my hopes, or if they will die with me.


   I'd like to turn the tables on those whales just once
   See how they'd like it, if upon them I'd pounce.

   
   Oh, to be able to eat just one of those creatures
   To digest it then burp, as I enjoyed all its features.


   They are the biggest things I have ever seen
   And that's o'er all the earth, wherever I've been.


   You wouldn't think that such a tiny creature like me
   Would have to ever be ready to swim in a hurry.


   But you know, when I really think about it I see
   Just what the attraction is in a creature like me.


   We are small and quick and abundantly abound
   I suppose we are tasty, or they wouldn't be around.


   We know that we are just simple little Krill
   What we don't know is...when is the time for us to be killed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations Dan on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:36 AM
I can picture a new James Bond feature 'A View to a Krill' - wonderful little story Daniel. Many congrats on your win in Nikko's contest >> James
Neels Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 4:11 AM
Daniel, congratulations to you on your win :) Wilma
Mannan Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:30 PM
This is just beautiful Daniel. Many congratulations for this win.Love the line'we are small......abound'
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Hey, is this the most eaten fish in the world? I think I read that somewhere? Anyway, what a cute K word to write on!! congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:07 PM
What a big poem from such a lttle subject. Congratulations on your nice win. Love, Joyce
Wilson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 12:45 PM
What an amusing poem!Congrats Daniel!take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:50 AM
congrats on your win in the contest with this adorable entry
Freeman Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations Daniel on a well deserved win in the top 10. Agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:08 AM
Another indication of your creative soul..this was so cute and yet tugged at my heart. BG
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Oh, this is really captivating, Daniel. All God's creatures, great and small! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:19 AM
I really wouldn't have thought about writing about krill but you made it so interesting! Now I feel for these poor little things-- and I just enjoyed how you wrote it from the viewpoint of the krill-- congrats, Dan :) Enjoyed this much! -- nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contetst, Daniel
Sweetheart Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Congrats Dan on your big win in Nikko's K contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoyed every line as always and u enjoy your sweet victory today with luv...my friend...
Henderson Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:39 AM
very nice Dan. I'm glad someone didn't tell me to make a poem about Krill, but you pulled it off very well. Charles
Richards Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 4:18 PM
A hunch I have, that this is just what Nikko was looking for!! Delightful, and funny, and not a word we hear too often! Great job! :)
A  Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 8:39 AM
WOW, A WONDERFUL POINT OF VIEW FROM A LITTLE KRILL, VERY INTERESTING, HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
Culverhouse Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 5:49 AM
makes me feel sorry for the krill.... not!! enjoyed reading your work it is well written!
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Very creative and interesting write on Krill, Daniel
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