Komorebi

When the last drop of rain falls upon hushed leaves,
and thin threads of hope seep through petrichor perfume of life,
an array of sun kissed colors bursts forth secrets of the sky;
a Komorebi of dreams woven amidst frolicking shadows of moonrise.

I search for an answer to the equations within my hazy mind, 
I ponder if poetic verses can paint a forest burnt from ignorance?
as I’ve long been sketching drizzling sakura foliage to find healing, 
from butterfly bliss strokes of faith that never fades. 

But love is the celestial maestro orchestrating
a cloudless chorus-
where mockingbirds croon to the notes of the sun and moon-
reflecting along rolling ripples of liquified lakes.

Is there a summery phrase to illustrate 
the gossamer warmth of cascading rays?
Maybe canopies of emeralds need no lyrical words,
for the heart of moving light only thrums and throbs in sanguine silence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Seeker Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Back with congratulations on your win, IE ~ a sublime write.
Puddifoot Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 5:09 AM
back with congrats on your win - i thought craig would like this one, and so do i :)
Parker Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations Ink, I knew Craig would like this creative poem of yours...well written dear poet
Empress Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 10:46 PM
Ah thank you frederick, i loved your take more than mine, i wrote mine in few mins because i had no time to write this time. And i thought i wont even get placed haha. Craig is so kind. Thank you so much
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November 30, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Oh, how I look forward to reading each of your new entries, dear Inky! "Canopies of emeralds," "love is a celestial maestro," "I ponder if poetic verses can paint a forest burnt from ignorance" and so many more eloquently crafted images and lines as "mockingbirds croon." You have painted the scene with such eloquent grace I am right with you in the forest after the rain watching "sun kissed colors" frolic among shadows. What an imagination! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
Empress Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 10:47 PM
Thank you sweet sam you are so kind always it always makes my day seeing your beautiful comments. You are like a ray of light, sending you blessings always too
Parker Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 4:02 PM
You dear poet have a creative imagination that illuminates with an enchantment of beautiful pictures painted with words of wondrous wonder...
Rolland Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 11:07 PM
very beautiful poetry, i leant a few words here, thahks for the enchanting verses yann
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and kind support. Appreciate always your constant and generous support
Silence Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:47 PM
Wow! The flow of this breathtaking piece is truly mesmeric..so soothingly flawless and divine! And your woven words, creating beautiful and powerfully vivid imageries I envision as I read and feel your raw and profoundly poignant and resonating piece, has my heart and soul, my beautiful soul sis! I’m drowning in the power, grace and beauty this piece exudes..I wish it could go on and on (as I do with all your poetry, poetic soul)
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Awwn my beautiful soul sis you are so sweet and kind to visit and comment on my poems always and support me in every way you can. I appreciate you
Pandit Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 3:28 PM
But love is the celestial maestro orchestrating a cloudless chorus-where mockingbirds croon to the notes of the sun and moon--Beautiful poetry, my friend. Meaning of title scintillates through your poem like sunlight filtering through trees.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Thank you vijay for always being so kind and so generous with your support. Im truly grateful that you take time to comment and to share your sincere support
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 3:08 PM
So sorry. I am on this cell phone and it kept rejecting each code. Then suddenly my reply popped up three times. Good grief.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Hah awwn its totally fine. This happens to me too, sometimes when i comment on certain poets poems the page crashes everytime and i have to do it all over again . Strange. Thank you so much for your visit and comments im truly grateful. I once did an elfchen on this word long time ago, not sure if youv done elfchens? But yeap elfchens are easier to do atleast for words like komorebi. Thank you again appreciate you so much
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 3:06 PM
So gorgeous. I cannot even attempt that challenge,!
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 3:06 PM
So gorgeous. I cannot even attempt that challenge,!
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November 28, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 3:05 PM
So gorgeous. I cannot even attempt that challenge,!
Hind Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Beautifully done, Ink! The last two lines were absolutely haunting. Enjoyed immensely!
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Awwn you are always so sweet thank you so much for being so kind and so supportive always
Buehler Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 2:26 PM
A captivating poem, beautifully expressed! My favorite is the first verse. I'm also happy to have learned a new word. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Thank you so very much. Yes thanks to craig for the word contest . Appreciate your visit and support truly
Poet Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 2:04 PM
Dear Ink, your thoughts on the Komorebi were expressed in a truly exquisite manner. The seamless flow of your words and the comforting nature of your ideas added a profound depth to this enchanting poem. The artful use of alliteration, striking imagery, and carefully chosen words further enhanced its already captivating beauty.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and kind feedback im truly always grateful for your generous support
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 8:12 AM
I love the komorebi of the angular light of fall. I am glad you introduced the Japanize word komorebi. Thanks for sharing this one with us and I to wonder what is going to happen to our earth as more and more forest land is eliminated. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara K
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so very much sara for always being so supportive and kind with your comments. I appreciate you visiting my page too always
Puddifoot Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 8:08 AM
i've seen many good entries for this contest, but this one is particularly lovely - nice light touch of alliteration, not too much, vivid imagery, and a strong closing line
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:04 AM
Ah this means alot coming from you thank you so very much. Grateful always
Seeker Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Beautiful portrayal of Komorebi, both literal and metaphorical, weaving a thread of magic, as only you can, IE. Good luck in the contest.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so very much seeker always for being so kind i appreciate your words , and support as you are an amazing writer
Buhagiar Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 8:00 AM
So lyrical in its execution, with imagery galore with some wonderful words. You always impress. Best for a win. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much victor for your kind and supportive thoughts and blessings, grateful always
One Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Komorebi is a beautiful word, i do not feel the English language fully describes it like many words from none English tongues... You have as always put your own twist on the contest, by writing about your deep thoughts, I guess rays of light through a canopy of trees would do that...canopies of emeralds sounds great but we all need lyrical words.. Good luck in the contest..
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:12 AM
I think you could do this very well as i remember you once did a poem with maldivian song title and you did it very well. Maybe you should give it a go. Thank you your support means alot always dear silent one
Goldsmith Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Your "Komorebi" is a wonderful write. You are making us think/that is a good thing. Let the reader do something more than just read. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Ahh thank you so much paula always for your support
Onpaper Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:31 AM
last drop of rain falls upon hushed leaves, array of sun kissed colors bursts forth secrets of the sky.. ooo love those structure of lines!!! if poetic verses can paint a forest burnt from ignorance… mmmmmmm damn papi!!! The architecture of this piece is freaking amazing!!! Mmmmm finishing healing from butterfly bliss strokes of faith that never fades.. u have begun to melt me !!!! the heart of moving light only thrums and throbs in sanguine silence… mic drop and roll!!!! Child this piece!!! Gorgeous
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November 28, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Wonderful writing. love this. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Thank you always gina for your kind and generous support grateful
Kaufman Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Dear Ms. Ink, Again you have painted such a lovely visual and uplifting poem dear poetess. Of course, I thank you for teaching me a new word today. God Bless and this most likely will be tomorrow's POTD.
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Awwn you are so sweet dear nancy, yes it was for a contest and I thought the word is pretty too. Im always so grateful for your sincere support
Culverhouse Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Cracking words scattered throughout such a poetic write, I'll be honest I had to google the title but now I've learnt something, you nailed it IE, brilliant piece
Empress Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Thank you so much yes its all thanks to craig i used the word as inspiration. Its beautiful. Alot of japanese words do seem very inspiring and poetic. Thank you so much for your visit and support truly
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