Knowing You Are There

Together we share...
it guarantees we care..
I know I can do anything 
as long as you are there....
Standing my ground on things that I care...
You give me the strength to speak my mind...
We are two souls, which have intertwined...
Our journey began when I was born...
On that bitter cold September morn...
You gave me a Bunny, that played a tune..
It was about the Sun, and not the Moon...
Then you gave me a hug and a sweet little kiss...
And told everybody you just got your wish...
You make me smile when I have a bad day..
And always have positive things to say...
I dedicate this to you my Brother...
As you are not like any other...
Your love for me has helped me grow...
To become the best Sister you’ll ever know....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/26/2016 7:43:00 PM
KJ, this is a touching and a wonderful poem. a very encouraging end. SKAT
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Kj Force
Date: 6/11/2016 10:28:00 AM
thank you SKAT...everything I write is a personal life experience, sometimes with a " twist " as seen through my eyes.. wearing "cracked rose coloured glasses "...
Date: 3/10/2016 11:40:00 PM
Hope you let your brother read this, I'm sure he'd be delighted. "You gave me a Bunny, that played a tune.. It was about the Sun, and not the Moon.." < I'm not sure exactly what this refers too, but I can tell it has had a sentimental impact on you. A fine tribute.
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Kj Force
Date: 6/11/2016 10:34:00 AM
this was a children's song that the stuffed animal ( brother gave baby sister when she was born ) titled " You are my sunshine "..based on my grandson and his baby sister..she still to this day worships him...if nothing else I ever accomplished in my life..they will remain intertwined spirits...
Date: 9/21/2015 2:57:00 PM
A very sweet dedication!! Our siblings do shape us. An uplifting, refreshing piece to read;thanks for sharing! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:21:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and commenting..glad you enjoyed. This poem was inspired by my G-D and her Brother, whom she worships..
Date: 8/28/2015 5:44:00 AM
what a beautiful piece. I love it.
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Date: 6/11/2016 10:25:00 AM
thank you.. glad you loved it....it is about my granddaughter and her admiration for her brother...
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