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Knowing Diddlysquat

Fresh faces open all about you Dynamite feelings through Time leads to another dimension I wish it could all be true There could be an army extension To battle your empty convention Where life interferes with peace too And where the mace leaves contusions I want to know diddlysquat about you For you have brought nothing but adieu Maybe you could bring me someone That can fill the void by falling through What does time have to do with anyone But our feelings deep inside everyone War can be hell, just let bygones be bygones And being by myself, I go about it alone Russell Sivey Entrant into Debbie Guzzi's "For Love of Language" 3/21/2012

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Date: 4/2/2012 8:50:00 PM
congrats Russell on a glorious write and win luv for this theme.. enjoyed every line of perfection luv..
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Date: 4/2/2012 11:18:00 AM
yes to this one, russell.. so well-formed!.. conmgrats on your great win! :) huggs!
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest "For Love Of Language" Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:55:00 AM
There you go Russ up to the next round! I likey this!! Thanks so much for all your effort! Light & Love
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:43:00 PM
Wow! You took "diddlysquat" and gave us a poem with emotion, truth and deep meaning. Bravo, Russell! If you check out Deb's blog, you'll see this is exactly what she wanted. Hope you get a first place for this extraordinary poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/21/2012 12:28:00 PM
This poem makes quite a statement... Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/21/2012 5:53:00 AM
LOL, yes, a very interesting word, Russell. Clever write
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Date: 3/21/2012 2:54:00 AM
I love your diddlysquat poem Russell :)Mucho enjoyed :)
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