Knotty

Finest pine has knots just like finest person too just a common fault

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/14/2024 7:34:00 PM

Dear Karen, so true! I admire the analogy in your wonderful Senryu. The beauty of your empathy shines, dear poetess! Congratulations for your poem is being showcased in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Karen Croft
Date: 1/14/2024 8:04:00 PM

Thank you very much for reading, glad you enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/4/2024 7:39:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this cute/fun write. I love pine with their knots. Glad Silent One did this. Have a fun day writing away........................

Karen Croft
Date: 1/4/2024 4:55:00 PM

Thank you! Have a great evening writing.

Silent One

Date: 1/3/2024 12:05:00 PM

This wasn't really a contest, but an opportunity to showcase an Na poem..

Karen Croft
Date: 1/3/2024 12:38:00 PM

Thank you for the opportunity!