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Knocks of the Spring

Knocks of the Spring harbingers of spring effulgent daffodils rise swallows fly afloat Haiku - 5/7/5 Written July 1st, 2015 For contest "Traditional haiku#2" by Shadow Hamilton

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Grace Mutindi

Date: 7/6/2015 3:57:00 AM

...lovely Haiku Dr. Upma...congrats!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/6/2015 11:31:00 PM

Thnx Grace!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/2/2015 11:43:00 PM

Lovely, animated Haiku, and big respect for using effulgent- not the prettiest word in the dictionary, but eminently suitable. Well done. Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/6/2015 11:30:00 PM

Thnx Viv!

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/2/2015 11:14:00 PM

Wonderfully written haiku! So action packed in just a few words! Congrats :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:15:00 PM

Thnx Laura dear!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2015 10:39:00 PM

hey, I am seeing this again on the winners' list today. BIG congrats to you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:07:00 PM

Thnx Andrea!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/2/2015 7:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:07:00 PM

thanks lee!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2015 6:26:00 PM

Nice write, Dr. Uqma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:08:00 PM

Thanks Eve! Appreciate ur kind visits n 7s!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/2/2015 6:20:00 PM

I agree with Andrea the first two lines are superb Dr Upma congrats on placing hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:08:00 PM

Thnx a lot Shadow! Glad u liked this one!

Skat A

Date: 7/2/2015 5:59:00 PM

Dr Upma, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:09:00 PM

Thnx SKAT!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/1/2015 1:05:00 PM

:) I've missed you, Dr Upma. Lovely haiku...harbingers of spring....lovely Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:12:00 PM

Thnx Eileen! Missed u too,, s'times see ur awesome pics on fb!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2015 12:35:00 PM

This is very nice. I especially like the first two lines.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:11:00 PM

Oh thnx dear!

Constance La France

Date: 7/1/2015 8:27:00 AM

Upma, awesome haiku, visually beautiful , a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku 10

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/2/2015 11:09:00 PM

Thnx a lot dear!