Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Haiku

Knocks of the Spring

Knocks of the Spring






        harbingers of spring
       effulgent daffodils rise
          swallows fly afloat






Haiku - 5/7/5
Written July 1st, 2015
For contest "Traditional haiku#2" by Shadow Hamilton

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Grace Mutindi July 6, 2015 at 3:57 AM ...lovely Haiku Dr. Upma...congrats! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 6, 2015 at 11:31 PM Thnx Grace!

Viv Wigley July 2, 2015 at 11:43 PM Lovely, animated Haiku, and big respect for using effulgent- not the prettiest word in the dictionary, but eminently suitable. Well done. Viv x Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 6, 2015 at 11:30 PM Thnx Viv!

Laura Leiser July 2, 2015 at 11:14 PM Wonderfully written haiku! So action packed in just a few words! Congrats :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:15 PM Thnx Laura dear!

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2015 at 10:39 PM hey, I am seeing this again on the winners' list today. BIG congrats to you! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:07 PM Thnx Andrea!

Lee Carter July 2, 2015 at 7:31 PM Congrats on your win! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:07 PM thanks lee!

Eve Roper July 2, 2015 at 6:26 PM Nice write, Dr. Uqma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:08 PM Thanks Eve! Appreciate ur kind visits n 7s!

Shadow Hamilton July 2, 2015 at 6:20 PM I agree with Andrea the first two lines are superb Dr Upma congrats on placing hugs Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:08 PM Thnx a lot Shadow! Glad u liked this one!

Skat A July 2, 2015 at 5:59 PM Dr Upma, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT* Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:09 PM Thnx SKAT!

Eileen Manassian July 1, 2015 at 1:05 PM :) I've missed you, Dr Upma. Lovely haiku...harbingers of spring....lovely Hugs Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:12 PM Thnx Eileen! Missed u too,, s'times see ur awesome pics on fb!

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2015 at 12:35 PM This is very nice. I especially like the first two lines. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:11 PM Oh thnx dear!

Constance La France July 1, 2015 at 8:27 AM Upma, awesome haiku, visually beautiful , a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku 10 Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2015 at 11:09 PM Thnx a lot dear!