Knock, Knock

Please place patience upon my palms, and put much Madness in my Heart. Stir in my Soul, a somber song- (Truth in Mind ere I depart) My course is forced; what woe- remorse! Thus from myself, at once divorced… A sojourn at every turn- and at my door, a Trojan Horse!

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Skat A

Date: 2/7/2014 12:14:00 PM

Knock, Knock, aqui es toy. lol <--- did I spell it right. :) on the soup, I meant to say. No i am not ok. :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/7/2014 12:16:00 PM

Sent you an email. My Spanish is terribly rusty lol

Karen Anglesey

Date: 11/12/2013 9:16:00 AM

Love the use of the Trojan horse. Had to read this after reading Debbie Guzzi's winning entry that was inspired by this. Excellent :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/13/2013 4:54:00 AM

Many thanks and much love, always, K <3 <3 :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/25/2013 9:05:00 PM

I really like the smooth flow of this! Great read aloud! Jimbo

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:40:00 AM

I sincerely appreciate the read and review, Jimbo; thanks for dropping by :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 10/25/2013 4:36:00 PM

Bravo, Tap!! I love the alliteration you have going in the first stanza. Sure you could do with more madness? I have loads to get rid of. Nice one, my eloquent friend. Licia :-)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:39:00 AM

lol You're right, D; I don't need any more madness. I appreciate the review and compliments :)

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/25/2013 1:42:00 PM

The Trojan horse I sure won't be, dear Archaic Poet Friend! i'm just knockin' in to feed my hungry soul and I must say, I can go satisfied and more curious about your new rhymes! Love, Hanitra

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:38:00 AM

Thanks for popping in, V; I appreciate the read and review :)