Knitting a Silken Crochet

Her hunched mound circles around while near dawning approaches... and my mind wonders of her need to spin more rows in puffs of hours, sewing and binding a delicate blanket made from loops. Somehow, I know what makes her hurry... as time wheezes, silken mother props her bed upon new day's request when egg sacs, her young, peep out toward a gently crocheted, wet earth. PD's Contest: Any Poem (you wrote) that makes you smile
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Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 12:57 AM
Marvelous poem, Nette. Congrats on your top win.
Tor Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 3:39 PM
nette a well deserved win. Congratulations.
Godwin Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Beautifully written. Congratulations. I cannot smile about a spider, but I can be fascinated by one and I truly enjoyed the read ... CayCay
Callus Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 3:49 PM
Such lovely personification, Nette! Your description of spider and web turn this poem into a deserved winning entry. Congratulations! Hugs // paul
Romaine Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Hey Nette, a hearty congratulations to you on your wonderful poem winning first place in Linda's contest! And a smile it definitely gives to us too! Be Blessed, Neva
Lane Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Nette: This is lovely. I wasn't a member of PS when you first posted this, so I'm so happy I didn't miss it this time around...I've always been in awe of a spider's web..fragile in appearance but strong enough to hold prey. There's beauty in every fiber as morning dew and sunshine turn one into a sparkling gem. Your write made me smile, too.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 5:03 AM
Really so subtle that puts to smile nette! Congrats on first place win!
Richards Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 7:33 PM
We can all smile too upon reading !! Congratulations to you Nette!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 5:12 PM
I was able to envision so clearly this scene with your wonderful imagery and it made me smile too. Congratulations Nette on your first place win!
A   Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Hi Nette, amazing imagery, I see why the poem had you smiling through and through. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~
Harper Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Nette, creative use of a wonderful simile, congratulations on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Uniquely Nette..Creative and expressive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:00 PM
I loved the personification!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Nettie a fabulous poem. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Very pretty description of the spider's skill. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Devnath  Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Great congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl
K. Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 12:18 PM
Ang galing naman-- I never thought of that before, na parang crochet-- but you are soo right! parang dating gantsilyo nga! beautiful descriptions and analogy you used here nette! As for the cupcakes-- hehe pwede hindi cupcakes? La akong oven ngayon eh! after July siguro?? sorry puro raincheck ako ha? Talagang busy lately eh, ngaragggg sa hindi multi tasker na tulad ko... have a fun albeit rainy week-- may bagyo daw?? hugs your way!
Hicks Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 1:46 AM
... knitting a silken crotchet. You have a killer of a title! Spiders are a little on the creepy side, but with your poem they seemed rather majestic. I loved your close up of the action on something so incredibly tiny... great work!
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:39 PM
my goodness, you have the contest all "sewed up" dearie, this is fantabulous!!
Michelle Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:17 PM
beautiful poem :D normally, things like this.. egg sacs and insect babies.. i can't do it, but you made it all sound so lovely
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 7:44 PM
The spider web is an amazing thing! You made it sound magical...thank you nette
Sivey Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:27 PM
I love the path you detoured us on just by introducing the spider! I had imagined an old lady crocheting on her rocking chair going back and forth in rhythm to each loop and stitch! You wove a delicate weave of mastery with this glorious poem! What a awe inspiring piece, Great Work!!
Tacito Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Mother Nature, sitting on a rocking chair, singing this lyrical treat for all creation. Spectacular.
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Wonderful imagery in this poem Nette!!Really loved it!
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:05 PM
Yesssss!!!
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