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Knife of Silence

You whip out your weapon and wield it with ease
Your silent stiletto sends me to my knees

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Rizwana Bhurani

October 31, 2015 at 9:37 AM

Silence is power.So much weaved artistically in killer lines.Wow,silence is power.

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2015 at 12:10 PM

Hello Tim, Congratulations, A nice "Pierced" win. Love LINDA **

Barbara Gorelick

March 7, 2015 at 6:30 PM

Oh, well done. You said so much with a few words..I would have placed this much higher. Congrats. BG

Richard Lamoureux

March 7, 2015 at 5:37 PM

Did you mean "Weild"? either way I enjoyed your poem Tim. Congrats.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

March 7, 2015 at 7:09 AM

Oh stiletto really piercing ...Congrats on win...Love Tim

Jan Allison

March 6, 2015 at 12:53 PM

Love your take on the theme Tim many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 29, 2012 at 9:55 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2012 at 3:58 PM

Congrats on your winning work with this great work..It had great flow to it...Sara

Barbara Gorelick

August 26, 2012 at 12:22 PM

Good one!..ckongrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

August 26, 2012 at 6:46 AM

Congratulations Tim hope you got up again xx

Poet Destroyer A

August 25, 2012 at 8:56 PM

TIM;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Lee Ramage

August 25, 2012 at 5:51 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Joy Wellington

August 25, 2012 at 5:41 PM

This piece has got the "WOW" factor. Great write...congrats my friend on this win. One love. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2012 at 12:55 PM

I remember this cool poem. Congrats on your win, Tim.

Kim Merryman

August 25, 2012 at 12:38 PM

Good job, Tim. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Terry O'Leary

August 25, 2012 at 10:33 AM

Sometimes, silence shrieks louder than words... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

August 16, 2012 at 8:24 AM

I like this Tim , it makes me laugh but I'm not sure it should, am I a bad person ha ha xx

Doris Culverhouse

August 15, 2012 at 4:15 PM

great work....silence is a deadly weapon.

Joyce Johnson

August 14, 2012 at 9:07 PM

You have a winner here Tim. I wrote on the same thing but took it in a different direction. Thank you so much for your very kind words on my Christmas in Heaven win. Love, Joyce