Kitty-Cat Conundrum

soft moccasin feet gleaming whiskers… deep green eyes whence that evil stare

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/15/2022 10:12:00 PM

sweet~

Valsa George

Date: 5/9/2022 9:26:00 PM

This is such a lovely haiku, Gershon ! I love the expression 'moccasin feet'

Judy Ball

Date: 5/9/2022 5:26:00 PM

Cats, gotta love 'em. Those tiny bodies are more powerful than you would expect but they are soft, loving little creatures who long to snuggle, however it must be on their terms. Great write Gershon. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2022 6:16:00 PM

You are so right, Judy. Always on their terms, with cats. Well, almost always. I once had a cat who thought he was a dog. He never did figure it out. lol. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/9/2022 12:30:00 PM

LOL…last line!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2022 6:11:00 PM

It's that magic word that grips all who read this: 'WHENCE?!' ~ What you starin' at?! lol. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/9/2022 12:18:00 AM

I couldn't believe how soft they were when I was stroking a lion in Mauritius (really) the trainer warned me to step back as those claws would have took my finger off. Mind you it was only about three months old lol Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2022 6:09:00 PM

Nah, Tom. 'Stroking a lion.' Knowing you, you are not 'lyin.' Couldn't get me to do that. ~ Different strokes for different folks!