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Kissing

I go in the rain words eternally engraved - the kiss of cold stone oh I remember kissing in the wet cool sand - my tears ever rain oh I remember kissing in a huge fierce storm - my weeping is the rain oh I remember kissing you in naked passion - wet with falling rain _____________________ May 24, 2013 Poetry/Haiku/kissing Copyright Protected, ID 05-4805-50-24 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Written for the contest, Kissing in the Rain sponsor, A Poet Destroyer, Judged 05/27/2013 Third Place

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/1/2013 4:31:00 PM

love this beautiful selection of haiku, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2013 9:46:00 AM

Great expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this memory of kisses from long ago..Congrats on your win..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 5/30/2013 3:55:00 AM

Beautiful poem Constance !( you are one year behind :)))

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 12:48:00 PM

Very nicely done! Many congrats on your win. AO

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2013 1:05:00 AM

beautiful, constance. Well deserved win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/28/2013 8:46:00 AM

So romantic!! Nicely done!!! Congratulations!!

Judy Konos

Date: 5/28/2013 5:51:00 AM

Naked Passion knows no clock, Congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2013 2:00:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2013 7:08:00 PM

Constance,. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/27/2013 7:10:00 PM

ps... this was almost a number one,,, except for the title... the title was a part of the grading.. don't get me wrong the title is very pretty

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/24/2013 4:57:00 PM

The power within your words that you so eloquently wrote here within this glorious write is very superior my friend! I am enthralled by the splendor of your delightful and wondrous poem! What a delectable piece, such fires of passion Constance, Great Work!!