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Kissing

 
I go in the rain
words eternally engraved -
the kiss of cold stone

oh I remember
kissing in the wet cool sand -
my tears ever rain

oh I remember
kissing in a huge fierce storm -
my weeping is the rain

oh I remember
kissing you in naked passion -
wet with falling rain

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May 24, 2013


Poetry/Haiku/kissing
Copyright Protected, ID 05-4805-50-24
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

Written for the contest, Kissing in the Rain
sponsor, A Poet Destroyer, Judged 05/27/2013

Third Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2013

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Jack Horne Date: 6/1/2013 4:31:00 PM love this beautiful selection of haiku, my friend Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/30/2013 9:46:00 AM Great expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this memory of kisses from long ago..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/30/2013 3:55:00 AM Beautiful poem Constance !( you are one year behind :))) Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/29/2013 12:48:00 PM Very nicely done! Many congrats on your win. AO Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2013 1:05:00 AM beautiful, constance. Well deserved win! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/28/2013 8:46:00 AM So romantic!! Nicely done!!! Congratulations!! Login to Reply

Judy Konos Date: 5/28/2013 5:51:00 AM Naked Passion knows no clock, Congratulations Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/28/2013 2:00:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/27/2013 7:08:00 PM Constance,. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA Login to Reply Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/27/2013 7:10:00 PM ps... this was almost a number one,,, except for the title... the title was a part of the grading.. don't get me wrong the title is very pretty

Russell Sivey Date: 5/24/2013 4:57:00 PM The power within your words that you so eloquently wrote here within this glorious write is very superior my friend! I am enthralled by the splendor of your delightful and wondrous poem! What a delectable piece, such fires of passion Constance, Great Work!! Login to Reply