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Kisses

Kisses   Forehead ~ cheeks ~ chin Remember when... On the nape of my neck I smile, you grin Kisses With slow ~ feathered Finger tips... You softly Outline my lips Kisses I long for them Your gentle kisses My smile, your grin Remember when... Lay

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Date: 4/18/2011 1:22:00 PM
lovely, brought me to smiles
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:23:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* What a sweet, enchanting and lovely verse my dear. = I love the image of such tenderness and the flowing of its rhythm and rhyme is perfect towards the moments melody of blessed love I would venture as to say == Wonderful painting dear Walayee; very pretty. === love, jasper
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:05:00 AM
Slow feathered outlining the lips very sensual and pleasant image, Walayee
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:21:00 AM
Such a tender write ... such passion throughout, but wanting more in your words scream out....always Michael
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:00:00 AM
as charming as you, lay... how have you been?? :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:45:00 PM
A very pretty and sweet poem, Lay, full of love~~
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