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Snowflakes fall like white crocheted dollies upon the warm soil of spring’s earth their fragile kisses melting They caress the crocus pucker up to buds on the maple give a peck to the cat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/11/2012 7:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this sweet write, Debbie! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/11/2012 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 2:13:00 AM
LOL...ahhh, I love this picture you portray so vividly Debbie...Congratulations on your win in the contest...big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/2/2011 4:54:00 PM
Ohhh I'm starting to love your poetry SO muchhh:)) it's just.. friggin' amazing. Let me know when/if you post a new poem today so I can come check it out. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 3/30/2011 9:44:00 PM
Kisses are cool and rate high on my list..like this poem Debbie.. now name of your Shaman Ways poem is??? .. help..
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Date: 3/25/2011 12:51:00 AM
love that first line, dEbs. And how they caress teh crocus. Great alliteration!
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:34:00 PM
Yes Debbie , I wished you did get this one in... very lovley...always with hugs Michael
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Date: 3/24/2011 4:45:00 PM
I guess now that I've grown up I'm just too MUCH to snap up? LOL
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:56:00 PM
You have an incredible heart Debbie, as your poetry tells. Why no man has snapped you up, oh my. You sure are one of my fav gems on here.....:)
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:02:00 AM
A great Nonet Debbie. I admire your eloquence and excellent imagery. Thanks for your inspiring comments on my poem Stars Go to Sleep -Mohammad
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:47:00 AM
Wow! Deb, the visuals in this Nonet are sensational. Elaine
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Date: 3/23/2011 6:39:00 PM
beautiful imagery, çrocheted dollies indeed. love it. Harry
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Date: 3/23/2011 3:21:00 PM
Indeed, very poetic and nicely construted. Thank you for sharing. eph.
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Date: 3/23/2011 12:09:00 PM
Very poetic and a novel idea to define sensual kiss to the cat, Debbie
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