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Kiss the Sun

Kiss the sun, fly with the wind, to live is a fire raging within. Be not some featherless bird or to a fallen angel akin. For all creation stands in awe of a lovers gaze when the onlookers around them deftly fade away. Slightest brush, skin to skin It begins... Unleashed fury of gale force winds to satiate the hunger within Sit not upon the rivers edge where past living waters run to ponder what cannot be changed Again I say, kiss the sun... The glory of life and love unrestrained breathe beyond all mortal bounds the cure for every remaining dream for this even the fallen angels bow the sorrows of awe-less scenes. Or would you dare this passion reprove by scorn and maddening pride? As if the risk of impossible kiss bore lesser profit than the living of a lie. Spiritless souls breed rainbows of grey, A flameless campfire, or pirouette on broken legs. So dull is life unknowing the awe of envies sigh to know you hold the priceless grace for such passion another would die. What comfort warm or excess steep would you cast like a snowflake on the sea... Lost in love and unredeemed in hopes that someday it was said... My God, This was written of me For I have kissed the Sun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/11/2014 7:57:00 PM
I saw the title and just knew it was going to be a great write.. Your first that I've read...So glad I scanned down to find this one. Direct into my fav it goes!! Thanks...
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Date: 5/12/2014 12:37:00 PM
What an exceptional piece - emotionally tantalizing and verbally mesmerizing!
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Date: 3/15/2014 5:01:00 PM
YOU'RE BAAAAACK! As usual, absolutely beautiful! Loving hugs, Jack XOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/17/2014 2:46:00 AM
As always thank you my dear dear friend. Hugs galore!
Date: 3/14/2014 6:39:00 PM
I got so caught up on this poem; I over looked the rating,~~ "shame on me." You kissed Gods cheek on this great piece.~~~10+
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/15/2014 2:57:00 AM
Again, many thanks. I look forward to visiting your page as well
Date: 3/14/2014 6:31:00 PM
Sarai, this poem is on another level, your inner beauty, is over flowing with passionate ideals. I am glad I stopped by. Fine write!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/15/2014 2:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for visiting Larry and for your kind comment
Date: 3/14/2014 5:09:00 PM
Hi Sarai, this is so beautiful! It deserves a top rating. keep up the good work. // paul
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/15/2014 2:54:00 AM
So grateful for your comment Paul. Enjoy your weekend.
Date: 3/14/2014 4:15:00 PM
- Beautiful poem Sarai!! - Love how it ends!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 3/15/2014 2:47:00 AM
Thank you for visiting Anne Lise. Hope you are enjoying your weekend too

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