Kiss the Rain

I stand here by the lakeshore, and I smell
fresh honeysuckle as I kiss the rain.
A memory that I cannot curtail
wafts bitter sweetly to me, and again
it’s May. . . the night you came by the moon's light.
The air was permeated by perfume
from blossoms colored innocently white.
But now it’s summer; yellow is each bloom.
When plump upon the vines, sweet berries, red,
will be swooped up by birds - carried away.
I stoop to touch a stem.  How soon has fled
my flowered youth, and now this day chilled grey.
I bow in downpour like the vines bent low
while raindrops - glistening with my own tears - flow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Smith Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Lovely work Andrea, congratulations...
Cozart Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Gorgeous. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 5:57 AM
You had me at fresh honeysuckle! LovelY, Congratulations, Andrea!
Barden Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 11:49 PM
Oh, so tender and sweet and melancholy ... my favorite stuff. Just gorgeous penning, Buddy, and a well-deserved win! Congrats! :-) <3
Cunningham Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Congratulations Andrea, well deserved win. Tom
Lawless Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:39 PM
OH, a metaphoric Sonnet beautifully done Andrea. Really like the gentle "shift"(can't remember the big word) in tone and substance....congrats on your placement
Gauthier Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Touching. What a beautiful poem. Congrats on your most deserving win, Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Absolutely beautiful--so deserving of the win, Andrea! Janice
Ashley Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Oh such a beautiful sonnet Andrea, with emotional imagery of bittersweet memories. Congratulations on your fantastic win! ~Susan
Leiser Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Beautiful imagery in your poem, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)
Krampe Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Lovely imagery in your well crafted sonnet. So glad you entered this in the contest. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
Richards Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Lovely this is, Andrea! It could be put to music! But then you always write with a special gift to bring each poem. This one was fragrant with memory and flowers :) Congrats!
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 11:14 PM
I wanted to check out the first sonnet you posted. Awesome Andrea, you are very inspiring, and not only to myself I can assure you. Great stuff /|\
Babcock Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Nice romantic sonnet. Congrats on your win. love phyl
Muzzey Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations Andrea, on your seventh place win with this wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Dom Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Ingriuing sonnet. and this seven line verse is a new challenge. Cheers!
Song Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 6:41 AM
U drew me into two romantic seasonal moments...I don't know which one I like more, the scent of honeysuckle with moonlight, or being swept away by birds at summer...G R E A T S C E N E S! Good luck with this contest.
Song Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 6:42 AM
ooops....congrats on this contest! Hey! :)
Pettit Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations on your win. Gail liked this one, and so do I.
Aul Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Very much enjoyed your words
Horne Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 3:06 PM
love this awesome sonnet, my friend - you're Soup's queen of sonnets for sure : )
Hunter Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:01 AM
Congrats on the placement, Andrea...though I thought it would be ranked higher...it's really good
A   Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 10:16 PM
Andrea, congratulations in Gail's "Kiss The Rain" contest. always~ PD
Sister Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 9:09 PM
I love the imagery you brought me there! Congrats
May Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:47 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:32 PM
Beautiful! Colors again... You're very good with rhyme, something I simply cannot do. My old brain just doesn't work that way, I guess. J
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