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Kiss the Rain

Feeling tired Your body stressed Mind a tumbling Dont know whats best Look out the window Another damp day Put on some shoes It is time to lay .. Those tears at bay Look up look up Feel  my touch Thats what the  rain Is saying to you Lift up your face Let my touch heal Destress your soul Make you whole .. Tears gone away Your aches fade away Your body feels limp The stress is abating A small smile appears The rain is so cool Don't want it to stop You lick at your lips Quenching your love .. Tears of hope now Those magic raindrops Work for you Making life lighter Easier to cope Smiling again Dimples on show Life is worth living Full of hope ... Tears of joy now All thanks to those fine raindrops, healing from above. 22/02/2013

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Date: 2/24/2013 2:07:00 PM
You really are a very versatile writer. I think really you're crafty like Jack. I enjoyed the poem very much, but then again, I find something that I enjoy in most of them.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/25/2013 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Wayland I try to be different ....Seren
Date: 2/24/2013 6:29:00 AM
Love the rain, love the poem , love your words... hugs Michael....
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 6:57:00 AM
aww thanks Michael, hugssss ...Seren
Date: 2/24/2013 6:29:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..One thing for sure the rain of late would wake one up for it is cold water..Thanks for stopping by..If this is for a contest, it reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 6:57:00 AM
Same here Sara, the weather is so cold ....Seren
Date: 2/23/2013 12:09:00 PM
Seren an awesome write. I love your take on this prompt of healing rain. Best wishes on the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 6:58:00 AM
Hi Connie, thanks for stopping b y....Seren
Date: 2/23/2013 8:12:00 AM
Star there is something wonderful about just standing in the rain and getting soaked, not all the time though, I like this a lot, have a great weekend...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/23/2013 9:17:00 AM
Diolch Dafydd, yes rain in small doses really is great. You too have a great weekend, just watching Wales beating Italy at rugby, making me smile.
Date: 2/23/2013 1:33:00 AM
This is a truly tremendous and entertaining write my friend! I am enthralled by the beauty you exude within this wonderful poem! What a powerfully heartfelt piece your have described here Seren! Such a delight to read this evening! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/23/2013 9:18:00 AM
Hi Russell glad you enjoyed my pem, have a brill weekend. ..Seren

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