Seren Roberts Poet Free verse

Kiss the Rain

Feeling tired
Your body stressed
Mind a tumbling
Dont know whats best
Look out the window
Another damp day
Put on some shoes
It is time to lay ..
Those tears at bay

Look up look up
Feel  my touch
Thats what the  rain
Is saying to you
Lift up your face
Let my touch heal
Destress your soul
Make you whole ..
Tears gone away 

Your aches fade away
Your body feels limp
The stress is abating
A small smile appears
The rain is so cool
Don't want it to stop
You lick at your lips
Quenching your love ..
Tears of hope now

Those magic raindrops
Work for you
Making life lighter
Easier to cope
Smiling again
Dimples on show
Life is worth living
Full of hope ...
Tears of joy now

All thanks to those fine raindrops, healing from above.



22/02/2013

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Wayland Bunch February 24, 2013 at 2:07 PM You really are a very versatile writer. I think really you're crafty like Jack. I enjoyed the poem very much, but then again, I find something that I enjoy in most of them. Seren Roberts February 25, 2013 at 5:27 PM Thank you Wayland I try to be different ....Seren

Sara Kendrick February 24, 2013 at 6:29 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work..One thing for sure the rain of late would wake one up for it is cold water..Thanks for stopping by..If this is for a contest, it reads like a winner to me..Sara Seren Roberts February 24, 2013 at 6:57 AM Same here Sara, the weather is so cold ....Seren

Michael J. Falotico February 24, 2013 at 6:29 AM Love the rain, love the poem , love your words... hugs Michael.... Seren Roberts February 24, 2013 at 6:57 AM aww thanks Michael, hugssss ...Seren

Connie Gildersleeve February 23, 2013 at 12:09 PM Seren an awesome write. I love your take on this prompt of healing rain. Best wishes on the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie Seren Roberts February 24, 2013 at 6:58 AM Hi Connie, thanks for stopping b y....Seren

David Williams February 23, 2013 at 8:12 AM Star there is something wonderful about just standing in the rain and getting soaked, not all the time though, I like this a lot, have a great weekend...David Seren Roberts February 23, 2013 at 9:17 AM Diolch Dafydd, yes rain in small doses really is great. You too have a great weekend, just watching Wales beating Italy at rugby, making me smile.

Russell Sivey February 23, 2013 at 1:33 AM This is a truly tremendous and entertaining write my friend! I am enthralled by the beauty you exude within this wonderful poem! What a powerfully heartfelt piece your have described here Seren! Such a delight to read this evening! Great Work!! Seren Roberts February 23, 2013 at 9:18 AM Hi Russell glad you enjoyed my pem, have a brill weekend. ..Seren