Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Kiss Me Good Morning

Her faint voice quietly sings

a cheerful love song

mixed in with the tapping sounds

of the falling water

 from inside the clear glass shower

The morning light illuminates the room

 and I can see her reflection

in the half-steamed bathroom mirror

A gorgeous sight

happiness radiating off her cheeks

and a smile you could die for

Quietly I sneak downstairs and start breakfast

nice plump honey browned sausage links

a couple of poached eggs

finely cut hash brown potatoes

garnished with some fresh succulent strawberries

and a hot cup of lemon tea

Merrily she enters the room

with an I love you grin

wraps her arms around me

and kisses me good morning.

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Vladislav Raven January 4, 2016 at 4:48 PM Hi Tim, your usual romantic self i see. An excellent write from your pen. Live the moments and write the moments, keeping the Love alive. May your golden pen keep singing Tim. A seven for this little gem....Vladislav

Hansteven Selfa December 27, 2015 at 7:33 AM Sweet. :)

John Lawless December 7, 2015 at 4:39 PM congrats on the placement Tim, lovely write....just hope you didn't poach the eggs you poached....

Eve Roper December 7, 2015 at 12:18 PM We need to change your name to Romantic love, like always beautiful! Tim, congratulations on your win!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 7, 2015 at 10:01 AM lovely poem..congrats on the win Tim :)

Michael Tor December 7, 2015 at 2:57 AM Mr Romantic. Excellent joy and emotion of love Tim. Congratulations.

John Hamilton December 6, 2015 at 11:45 PM Nice one Tim! Congrats on your well deserved win.

Susan Gentry December 6, 2015 at 10:13 PM Congratulations! Lovely way to start the day... Romantic, light, was nice to read.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 6, 2015 at 9:57 PM As romantic as ever Tim.. Congrats on great win!

Skat A December 6, 2015 at 5:05 PM ha, I like the way Nathan on the bottom calls you a lucky Poet :)

Skat A December 6, 2015 at 5:04 PM Tim <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**

Paul Callus November 19, 2015 at 4:37 PM A beautiful moment in time! Sensual and romantic. I like your appetizing breakfast, too:) // paul

Nathan D. November 19, 2015 at 10:27 AM lucky dog. very awesome write

Kp Nunez November 18, 2015 at 2:05 PM Sweet. You manage to be practical, light-hearted and practical all in one write. Good one, Tim!

Demetrios Trifiatis November 18, 2015 at 8:20 AM Tim, my friend you are a great chef and poet but leaving the vision upstairs to go downstairs and prepare breakfast...? Haha. Very romantic and tender poem! A seven!

Judy Konos November 18, 2015 at 6:43 AM SHOWER POWER! WOW

Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2015 at 3:33 AM - What a morning ..... with this adorable kiss, Tim - Lovely! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop November 18, 2015 at 1:10 AM Good Morning Tim... Now you got me hungry , That's. kind of breakfast I love. A romantic ,sensual and sweet poem. Love the tiny details. Love the last four lines so much..Makes me picture an ideal couple in love. I love it..A fave.

Lin Lane November 17, 2015 at 5:07 PM Well how sweet is that? And I don't just mean the poem...that breakfast is very tempting, Tim.

Ilene Bauer November 17, 2015 at 4:50 PM what a beautiful and cozy picture you've painted here, tim! a great poem which i enjoyed very much...