Len Gasun Poet Sonnet

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This poem was inspired by my very dear friend Skat and her contest.

Kiss Mark of the Sun

When the sun sets and says its sweet goodbye,
It leaves an immense kiss mark on the sky,
A promise that it’ll return tomorrow,
To take away all our fears and sorrow.

Its kiss mark is dappled with lavender,
Birds hover above  to feel its wonder,
The silhouettes of mountains and the trees,
An art of prosperity, joy and peace.

Its kiss mark is in hue of pink and red,
A fiery love of God sent with roses,
Feel its tranquility and its warmness,
Panacea on worries that come ahead.

Crimson sky is the kiss mark of the sun,
A dazzling beauty since the world  begun.

May 19, 2013


First Place
Contest: Crimson Sky
Judged: 5/19/2013
Sponsor: Poet Skat

First Place
Contest: Your Best 2013
Judged: 1/7/14
Sponsor: My loving greatest poet, PD

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James Horn October 2, 2015 at 7:04 AM LG, Galinta reminds me of ice cream. A truly lovely scene with a great message. Jim Hon Len Gasun October 4, 2015 at 11:30 AM :)))) Thank you so much my dear friend for your precious time reading my humble write and your wonderful comments. Blessings to you!

Kp Nunez August 2, 2015 at 2:04 AM Awesome poetry here, kabayan! Wow, I'm in the company of extremely talented writers! Proud to wear the same colors, my friend! hugs!

Robert Lindley April 6, 2015 at 8:29 AM Delighted to have found this fine sonnet. Title drew me to read and its a superb poem. I see that it also won first place, big congrats on that honor! A7 and a fine read this morn for me. Thanks..

Nathan D. May 17, 2014 at 4:02 PM I can see why this poem won first place in 2 contest very well done sorry for the late congrats.

Skat A February 17, 2014 at 9:40 AM A beauty mark from the sun... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A January 7, 2014 at 11:10 AM wow....wow...WOW.....LINDA

Poet Destroyer A January 7, 2014 at 11:09 AM Hello my sweetest sis, I'm here finishing my contest... WOW, I have forgotten about this one.. All I know I was impressed, and immediately gave it a #1... I'm going to mark this one as a favorite poem again. Loving everything about the poem, the best imagery when spinning on world thoughts. , thank you for everything, Congrats for the well deserved win...always~ Linda

Karen Anglesey June 16, 2013 at 7:03 PM I see this on the Top 100 Most Recent Poems this week. A Pleasure to read again and going in my faves

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2013 at 10:28 PM Leo, stopping in to say good night and enjoy this remarkable kiss of rays one more time. The kiss of the sun over glory. a neat pink and red sky. The song of a sweet goodbye into the lovely night. you are wonderful, and thank you for the lovely comments... always and forever... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2013 at 7:24 PM It's around 8 pm here. I wish it was morning already. I'm tired, but i think i handle another hour or 2. maybe you can pass me some of your new and fresh energy this morning... I am working on a poem for your contest. I hope i don't miss your contest. I am glad you added a few more entries. I will work on it tomorrow after work. nice seeing you here today... LINDA

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2013 at 4:42 PM gliding oh so tenderly, leonora... you are sun-kissed wordsmith... you make this piece sing!... hope to see you soon!.. ;) huggs

Bl Devnath May 25, 2013 at 11:56 AM Excellent beauty imaged. Last lines depicts clearly. Loved always, bl

Karen Anglesey May 24, 2013 at 8:39 PM Truely one of the most beautiful poems I have had the pleasure to read..."kiss mark of the sun"fantastic imagery and captivating from beginning to end. :)

Jack Horne May 24, 2013 at 2:49 PM this is lovely. congrats on your wins, my friend

Peter Kiggin May 24, 2013 at 2:36 AM The only word I would change is warmness to warmth but apart from that you have a great talent and should embrace it with both hands and get great comfort from it.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2013 at 1:43 AM - S-mail.... <3 <3 <3

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2013 at 11:56 PM Hi Leo, stopping by to say hi, and thanks for all the nice text... you are the best.. Hoping things go back to normal tomorrow... Good night sis... xox~ Linda

Joyce Johnson May 23, 2013 at 11:40 PM This is a lovely sonnet, Leonora. Thank you for your nice comments. Love, Joyce

Red Omara May 23, 2013 at 11:37 PM Very lovely sonnet, Leonora. and belated congratulations for your fine win with this one.-Red

Robert Pettit May 23, 2013 at 11:09 PM Nice metaphorical descriptiveness in this work. Good one as usual.

Isaiah Zerbst May 23, 2013 at 10:14 PM Amazing poem here! I just love those bright red sunsets. ~ Thank you very much for reading and commenting on so many of my poems. Your last one was so nice to hear.

Princess Pop May 22, 2013 at 12:36 PM nice

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2013 at 10:53 PM what a sweet picture this is, Leonora. A catchy title and a lovely sonnet you have created.

Poet Destroyer A May 20, 2013 at 9:48 PM Hi Sweet Leo, i fell in love with your poem, the first time I read the poem.. I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 20, 2013 at 11:08 AM Beautiful sonnet Leo love xx

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