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Kiss Loneliness Goodbye Written By Tim Smith and Seren

I sit here and ponder the days that have past The many loves that I had, that just didn’t last. One really sticks out, wish I had another chance Treating her so differently, I’d show her romance. I loved once a man, who just wanted to play At being romantic .life was just foreplay. Thought a kiss would be enough for his turtle dove Not thinking about feelings, whether I wanted love. We would start a family, having a baby or two We’d live on the hillside, with a beautiful view, We’d grow old together in the home that we build Giving my life meaning, I’d be so fulfilled. He now thinks that he wants me, I am the one to fill up his heart to make me his own. Promising me a home on a hillside with a view Yet he hasn’t vowed that he would be true. I’d hold her and cherish her til the day we depart I’d profess to her my love and give her my heart Romantic nights on that hill gazing up at the moon Our days filled with laughter, frolicking in the lagoon Sure he now promises me love for ever after A life of joy, happiness and full of laughter On that hillside we’d sit, watching the world go by, A family, two dogs at our feet, kissing loneliness goodbye. Penned by Tim Smith and Seren

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/25/2016 7:00:00 AM
Valid sentiments both yesterday and today.
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:34:00 PM
Hmmmm interesting contrast I guess I would say. I think I'll read it again lol.
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Date: 10/20/2014 5:24:00 PM
I can't leave you alone for a minute and your off writing with another man. All the same this is great, you two do it well. Do you have any naked pictures of Tim? Want to buy some?
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/21/2014 8:02:00 AM
I do I do....I hear his is all that...lol
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/21/2014 2:49:00 AM
Waited for you Maurice, you were busy elsewhere boo hoo. Naked. Hmm hmmm nooooo but doesn't a little bit of not knowing make life spicier. Fires the imagination to immeasurable heights. Lol. Seren
Date: 10/19/2014 10:00:00 AM
Wow..This is so romantic and such a positive ending-Going to my favs.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2014 11:12:00 AM
thanks Charmaine for fav it, was so much fun writing with Tim, again. Seren, Thank you from the two of us....Seren
Date: 10/19/2014 9:30:00 AM
A beautifully penned poem full of hopes and dreams and I adore the title. Brilliant collaboration Seren and Tim into faves we go:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2014 11:09:00 AM
thanks Jan I wrote the actual words, but Tim suggested them for a title. Brilliant of him.... Seren
Date: 10/19/2014 8:39:00 AM
beside actually seeing the word italics, this was real nice. I like how you separated the voices and thoughts, each one showing the perspectives, how vary they become in a situation like this. well done Seren and Tim :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2014 11:12:00 AM
Yes Cas thank goodness , lol Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2014 8:40:00 AM
have rectified the error Cas geez took me ages to fathom it out duh had my thicko brain on. Thanks
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Casarah Nance
Date: 10/19/2014 8:40:00 AM
ahha you fixed it, :-)

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