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Kiss saves and kills Drop by drop KISS increases To form an ocean of EMOTION EMOTION in love billows Around many pillows With PASSION it is POWERED You lose control over your EMOTION Your EMOTION now sets you in MOTION To the journey of no return. You may ask, What is bad in it? The bad IN it is at the END of it!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/10/2013 1:48:00 PM
I like the pace of this piece. Well done!
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Date: 9/10/2012 4:45:00 PM
To kiss or not to kill that is the Question.. fulled of emotion
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Annie Lander
Date: 9/10/2012 4:46:00 PM
to kiss or not to kiss.. an error
Date: 8/20/2012 7:36:00 AM
hahaha, a very tempting journey to be inside the kiss. A very fantastic write, Fisayo. Thanks for stopping by :D
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Date: 8/16/2012 9:00:00 AM
With all the kissing contest that happen last week... I could not help but open this 1... I love the drop of your free verse style rhyme...some emotions have no return once you sunk this kiss of Depth...or death...or debt... love it. ..pd
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Date: 8/15/2012 1:36:00 PM
Wow this is a poem that deserves a reward! Jane xoxo :)
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Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 8/16/2012 3:16:00 AM
Thanks Jane.
Date: 7/1/2012 6:27:00 AM
Beautiful journey with poetry! Fisayo! Jimbo
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Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 7/1/2012 6:36:00 AM
Thanks James.
Date: 3/21/2012 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Anne, i feel the kicks of your kiss. XXX
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Date: 3/3/2012 5:56:00 AM
Sending kiss from Norway! - oxox Anne-Lise
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