Kiss

Kiss Lips Pucker Tantalize Passions ignite... Heaven on Earth ~ The Herald Angels sing! Kiss

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/11/2019 7:20:00 PM

These are a bit of a challenge to write for me Gershon. You excelled in this form! xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2019 8:26:00 PM

Guess what? A tetractys is a challenge for me too. I tore my hair out for an hour on the fourth line alone. Finally got there. Nothing comes easy.... Thank you for your kind words and your support, Connie. Best wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/11/2019 5:39:00 PM

Nice!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2019 8:24:00 PM

Thanks, Kim! :) gw

Chris Green

Date: 9/11/2019 2:56:00 PM

That was so cool. I love that closing line. This was perfect my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2019 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, Chris. I have a question for you on soup mail. Best wishes, Gershon

Bobby May

Date: 9/11/2019 2:36:00 PM

Oh how I remember my first kiss, great write my friend!!

Bobby May
Date: 9/11/2019 4:32:00 PM

LOL I hope so!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2019 4:00:00 PM

The only question is: Does SHE remember that kiss too?! Thanks for the support, Bobby! :) gw